Two Visions Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABAB ACAC ADAD EAEA ADAD AEAE FGFG HIHI E EF EFEF JDJD EAE FKFK HGHG ALAL HMHM FAFA FDFD HAHA HNHN AAAA AAAA AFAF AHAH EDED JF HDHD DHDH HFHF AOAO AFAF DHDH DADA JEJE APAP FAFA JQJQ HAHA DEDE JHJH JEJE AHAH DRRR SDSD HDHD EOE HTHT FOFO EAE FRFRThe curtains of the Night were folded | A |
Over suspended sense | B |
So that the things I saw were moulded | A |
I know not how nor whence | B |
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Straight I beheld a marble city | A |
Built upon wayward slopes | C |
Along whose paths as if for pity | A |
Ran tight drawn golden ropes | C |
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Withal of many who ascended | A |
No one appeared to use | D |
This help allowed in days since mended | A |
When folks had frailer thews | D |
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The men all animal in vigour | E |
Strode stalwart and erect | A |
But on their brows in placid rigour | E |
Watched sovereign Intellect | A |
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Women brave limbed sound lunged full breasted | A |
Walked at a rhythmic pace | D |
Yet not for that the less invested | A |
With every female grace | D |
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Unveiled and wholly unattended | A |
Strolled maidens to and fro | E |
Youths looked respect but never bended | A |
Obsequiously low | E |
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And each with other sans condition | F |
Held parley brief or long | G |
Without provoking rash suspicion | F |
Of marriage or of wrong | G |
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Distinction none of wooed or winning | H |
And no one made remark | I |
Till came they where the old were spinning | H |
As it was growing dark | I |
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And saying hushed untimely laughter | E |
Henceforward we are one ' | - |
Went homewards Nor could ever after | E |
Such Sanction be undone | F |
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All were well clad but none were better | E |
And gems beheld I none | F |
Save where there hung a jewelled fetter | E |
Symbolic in the sun | F |
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I found Cathedral none nor steeple | J |
Nor loud defiant choirs | D |
No martyr worshipped by the people | J |
On half extinguished pyres | D |
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But oft exclaimed they one to other | E |
Or as they passed or stood | A |
Let us co perate my brother | E |
For God is very good ' | - |
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I saw a noble looking maiden | F |
Close Dante's solemn book | K |
Go and return with linen laden | F |
And wash it in the brook | K |
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Anon a broad browed poet dragging | H |
Logs for his hearth along | G |
Without one single moment flagging | H |
In shaping of his song | G |
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Each one some handicraft attempted | A |
Or holp the willing soil | L |
None but the ag d were exempted | A |
From communistic toil | L |
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Yet 'twas nor long nor unremitting | H |
Since shared in by the whole | M |
But left to each one as is fitting | H |
Full leisure for the Soul | M |
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Was many a group in allocution | F |
On problems that delight | A |
And lift when e'en beyond solution | F |
Man to a nobler height | A |
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And oftentimes was brave contention | F |
Such as beseems the wise | D |
But always courteous abstention | F |
From over swift replies | D |
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And I remarked though whilst debating | H |
'Twas settled what they sought | A |
There was completest vindicating | H |
Of unrestricted thought | A |
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Age lorded not nor rose the hectic | H |
Up to the cheek of Youth | N |
But reigned throughout their dialectic | H |
Sobriety of truth | N |
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And if a long held contest tended | A |
To ill defined result | A |
It was by calm consent suspended | A |
As over difficult | A |
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And verse or music was demanded | A |
Then solitude of night | A |
By which all potent Three expanded | A |
Waxeth the Inner Sight | A |
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So far the city All around it | A |
Olive or vine or corn | F |
Those having pressed or trod or ground it | A |
By these 'twas townwards borne | F |
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And placed in halls unbarred and splendid | A |
With none to overlook | H |
But whither each at leisure wended | A |
And what he wanted took | H |
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I saw no crippled forms nor meagre | E |
None smitten by disease | D |
Only the old nor loth nor eager | E |
Dying by sweet degrees | D |
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And when without or pain or trouble | J |
These sank as sinks the sun | F |
This is the sole Inevitable ' | - |
All said His will be done ' | - |
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And went with music ever swelling | H |
Where slopes o'erlook the sea | D |
Piled up the corse with herbs sweet smelling | H |
Consumed and so set free | D |
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O'er ocean wave and mountain daisy | D |
As curled the perfumed smoke | H |
The notes grew faint the vision hazy | D |
Straining my sense I woke | H |
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Swift I arose Soft winds were stirring | H |
The curtains of the Morn | F |
Auguring day by signs unerring | H |
Lovely as e'er was born | F |
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No bluer calmer sky surmounted | A |
The city of my dream | O |
And what few trees could then be counted | A |
Did full as gracious seem | O |
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But here the pleasant likeness ended | A |
Between the cities twain | F |
Level and straight these streets extended | A |
Over an easy plain | F |
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Withal the people who thus early | D |
Began the ways to throng | H |
With curving back and visage surly | D |
Toiled painfully along | H |
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Groups of them met at yet closed portals | D |
And huddled round the gate | A |
Patient as smit by the Immortals | D |
And helots as by Fate | A |
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Right many a cross crowned front and steeple | J |
Clave the cerulean air | E |
As grew the concourse of the people | J |
They rang to rival prayer | E |
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On their confronting walls were posted | A |
Placards in glaring type | P |
Whereof there was not one but boasted | A |
Truth full grown round and ripe | P |
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And with this self congratulation | F |
Each one the other banned | A |
With threats of durable damnation | F |
From the Eternal Hand | A |
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Hard by were challenges to wrangle | J |
On any themes or all | Q |
From the trisection of the angle | J |
To what they termed the Fall | Q |
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Surmounting these were Forms forbidding | H |
Some strife about the Flood | A |
Since in such points divine unthridding | H |
Shed had been human blood | A |
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From arch and alley sodden wretches | D |
Crept out in half attire | E |
And groped for fetid husks and vetches | D |
In heaps of tossed out mire | E |
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Until disturbed by horses' trample | J |
Bearing the homeward gay | H |
Who sleek and warm with ermines ample | J |
And glittering diamond spray | H |
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That lightly flecked the classic ripple | J |
Of their full flowing hair | E |
For shivering child and leprous cripple | J |
Had not a look to spare | E |
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With garments which the morn ill mated | A |
Anon came youths along | H |
From side to side they oscillated | A |
And trolled a shameful song | H |
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Fair as is fair a cankered lily | D |
A girl who late did lie | R |
Beneath my window slumbrous stilly | R |
Rose as these youths came nigh | R |
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She seized the comeliest and stroked him | S |
And plied each foul device | D |
And having to her flesh provoked him | S |
Then haggled for the price | D |
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Hereat my heart this long while throbbing | H |
And brimming by degrees | D |
O'erflowed and passionately sobbing | H |
I dropped upon my knees | D |
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And made forgetful by the fluster | E |
Of trouble's fierce extreme | O |
I cried O Thou the great Adjuster | E |
God realise my dream ' | - |
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Up came the sun and straight were shining | H |
Steeple and sill and roof | T |
To such rash prayer and bold repining | H |
A visible reproof | T |
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Rebuked I rose from genuflexion | F |
And did no more blaspheme | O |
Closing mine eyes for retrospection | F |
Of the departed dream | O |
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Where men saluted one the other | E |
Or as they passed or stood | A |
Let us co perate my brother | E |
For God is very good ' | - |
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And I resolved by contrast smitten | F |
To live and strive by Law | R |
And first to write as here are written | F |
The Visions Twain I saw | R |
Alfred Austin
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