You Mustn't Show Weakness Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE AFGH IEJKA LMN AOPQRST U

You mustn't show weaknessA
and you've got to have a tanB
But sometimes I feel like the thin veilsC
of Jewish women who faintD
at weddings and on Yom KippurE
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You mustn't show weaknessA
and you've got to make a listF
of all the things you can loadG
in a baby carriage without a babyH
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This is the way things stand nowI
if I pull out the stopperE
after pampering myself in the bathJ
I'm afraid that all of Jerusalem and with it the whole worldK
will drain out into the huge darknessA
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In the daytime I lay traps for my memoriesL
and at night I work in the Balaam MillsM
turning curse into blessing and blessing into curseN
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And don't ever show weaknessA
Sometimes I come crashing down inside myselfO
without anyone noticing I'm like an ambulanceP
on two legs hauling the patientQ
inside me to Last AidR
with the wailing of cry of a sirenS
and people think it's ordinary speechT
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Translated by Chana Bloch and Stephen MitchellU

Yehuda Amichai



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