The Shield Of Achilles Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBBCDED FGFGHII JKJKKLL ABMNCOPQ RSRSSTT UVUVVWW AXYZA2B2C2B2 D2E2D2E2E2F2F2 C2G2H2G2I2J2BJ2

She looked over his shoulderA
For vines and olive treesB
Marble well governed citiesB
And ships upon untamed seasB
But there on the shining metalC
His hands had put insteadD
An artificial wildernessE
And a sky like leadD
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A plain without a feature bare and brownF
No blade of grass no sign of neighborhoodG
Nothing to eat and nowhere to sit downF
Yet congregated on its blankness stoodG
An unintelligible multitudeH
A million eyes a million boots in lineI
Without expression waiting for a signI
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Out of the air a voice without a faceJ
Proved by statistics that some cause was justK
In tones as dry and level as the placeJ
No one was cheered and nothing was discussedK
Column by column in a cloud of dustK
They marched away enduring a beliefL
Whose logic brought them somewhere else to griefL
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She looked over his shoulderA
For ritual pietiesB
White flower garlanded heifersM
Libation and sacrificeN
But there on the shining metalC
Where the altar should have beenO
She saw by his flickering forge lightP
Quite another sceneQ
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Barbed wire enclosed an arbitrary spotR
Where bored officials lounged one cracked a jokeS
And sentries sweated for the day was hotR
A crowd of ordinary decent folkS
Watched from without and neither moved nor spokeS
As three pale figures were led forth and boundT
To three posts driven upright in the groundT
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The mass and majesty of this world allU
That carries weight and always weighs the sameV
Lay in the hands of others they were smallU
And could not hope for help and no help cameV
What their foes like to do was done their shameV
Was all the worst could wish they lost their prideW
And died as men before their bodies diedW
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She looked over his shoulderA
For athletes at their gamesX
Men and women in a danceY
Moving their sweet limbsZ
Quick quick to musicA2
But there on the shining shieldB2
His hands had set no dancing floorC2
But a weed choked fieldB2
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A ragged urchin aimless and aloneD2
Loitered about that vacancy a birdE2
Flew up to safety from his well aimed stoneD2
That girls are raped that two boys knife a thirdE2
Were axioms to him who'd never heardE2
Of any world where promises were keptF2
Or one could weep because another weptF2
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The thin lipped armorerC2
Hephaestos hobbled awayG2
Thetis of the shining breastsH2
Cried out in dismayG2
At what the god had wroughtI2
To please her son the strongJ2
Iron hearted man slaying AchillesB
Who would not live longJ2

W. H. Auden



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