The Shield Of Achilles Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABBBCDED FGFGHII JKJKKLL ABMNCOPQ RSRSSTT UVUVVWW AXYZA2B2C2B2 D2E2D2E2E2F2F2 C2G2H2G2I2J2BJ2She looked over his shoulder | A |
For vines and olive trees | B |
Marble well governed cities | B |
And ships upon untamed seas | B |
But there on the shining metal | C |
His hands had put instead | D |
An artificial wilderness | E |
And a sky like lead | D |
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A plain without a feature bare and brown | F |
No blade of grass no sign of neighborhood | G |
Nothing to eat and nowhere to sit down | F |
Yet congregated on its blankness stood | G |
An unintelligible multitude | H |
A million eyes a million boots in line | I |
Without expression waiting for a sign | I |
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Out of the air a voice without a face | J |
Proved by statistics that some cause was just | K |
In tones as dry and level as the place | J |
No one was cheered and nothing was discussed | K |
Column by column in a cloud of dust | K |
They marched away enduring a belief | L |
Whose logic brought them somewhere else to grief | L |
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She looked over his shoulder | A |
For ritual pieties | B |
White flower garlanded heifers | M |
Libation and sacrifice | N |
But there on the shining metal | C |
Where the altar should have been | O |
She saw by his flickering forge light | P |
Quite another scene | Q |
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Barbed wire enclosed an arbitrary spot | R |
Where bored officials lounged one cracked a joke | S |
And sentries sweated for the day was hot | R |
A crowd of ordinary decent folk | S |
Watched from without and neither moved nor spoke | S |
As three pale figures were led forth and bound | T |
To three posts driven upright in the ground | T |
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The mass and majesty of this world all | U |
That carries weight and always weighs the same | V |
Lay in the hands of others they were small | U |
And could not hope for help and no help came | V |
What their foes like to do was done their shame | V |
Was all the worst could wish they lost their pride | W |
And died as men before their bodies died | W |
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She looked over his shoulder | A |
For athletes at their games | X |
Men and women in a dance | Y |
Moving their sweet limbs | Z |
Quick quick to music | A2 |
But there on the shining shield | B2 |
His hands had set no dancing floor | C2 |
But a weed choked field | B2 |
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A ragged urchin aimless and alone | D2 |
Loitered about that vacancy a bird | E2 |
Flew up to safety from his well aimed stone | D2 |
That girls are raped that two boys knife a third | E2 |
Were axioms to him who'd never heard | E2 |
Of any world where promises were kept | F2 |
Or one could weep because another wept | F2 |
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The thin lipped armorer | C2 |
Hephaestos hobbled away | G2 |
Thetis of the shining breasts | H2 |
Cried out in dismay | G2 |
At what the god had wrought | I2 |
To please her son the strong | J2 |
Iron hearted man slaying Achilles | B |
Who would not live long | J2 |
W. H. Auden
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