Ungrateful Hearts Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABB CCDD EEFF GGHI J

You listened close to every mournA
Carried burdens heavy wornA
You gave until your soul was bareB
A hollow gift beyond repairB
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They asked you gave till nothing stayedC
Your kindness spent your strength betrayedC
And when the end drew near aloneD
Their memories lost your deeds unknownD
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They turned away forgot your flameE
Ungrateful hearts without a nameE
But loss is theirs not yours to keepF
For shallow roots can never deepF
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Your giving shines though none recallG
A noble heart that gave its allG
Their silence speaks their shadows showH
Ungrateful souls reap what they sowI
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Would you like me to reshape this into a darker gothic version refine it into a rhyming ballad or transform it into an anthem like chorus that could be repeated like a songJ

Vanessa Dizon Alvarez
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/03/2026



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