Lakshman's Departure Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AB CC DD E FF GG HH CC II J KL MM NN OO P CC QQ RS MM TT JJ HH F

'Heardst that distant cry of danger ' questioned Sita in distressA
'Woe to me who in my frenzy sent my lord to wildernessB
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Speed brave Lakshman help my Rama doleful was his distant cryC
And my fainting bosom falters and a dimness clouds my eyeC
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To the dread and darksome forest with thy keenest arrows speedD
Help thy elder and thy monarch sore his danger and his needD
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For perchance the cruel Rakshas gather round his lonesome pathE
As the mighty bull is slaughtered by the lions in their wrath '-
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Spake the hero 'Fear not Sita Dwellers of the azure heightF
Rakshas nor the jungle rangers match the peerless Rama's mightF
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Rama knows no dread or danger and his mandate still I ownG
And I may not leave thee Lady in this cottage all aloneG
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Cast aside thy causeless terror in the sky or earth belowH
In the nether regions Rama knows no peer or equal foeH
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He shall slay the deer of jungle he shall voice no dastard cryC
'Tis some trick of wily Rakshas in this forest dark and highC
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Sita thou hast heard my elder bid me in this cottage stayI
Lakshman may not leave thee Lady for this duty to obeyI
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Ruthless Rakshas roam the forest to revenge their leader slainJ
Various are their arts and accents chase thy thought of causeless pain '-
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Sparkled Sita's eye in anger frenzy marked her speech and wordK
For a woman's sense is clouded by the danger of her lordL
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Markest thou my Rama's danger with a cold and callous heartM
Courtest thou the death of elder in thy deep deceitful artM
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In thy semblance of compassion dost thou hide a cruel craftN
As in friendly guise the foeman hides his death compelling shaftN
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Following like a faithful younger in this dread and lonesome landO
Seekest thou the death of elder to enforce his widow's handO
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False thy hope as foul thy purpose Sita is a faithful wifeP
Sita follows saintly Rama true in death as true in life '-
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Quivered Lakshman's frame in anguish and the tear stood in his eyeC
Fixed in faith and pure in purpose calm and bold he made replyC
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'Unto me a Queen and Goddess as a mother to a sonQ
Answer to thy heedless censure patient Lakshman speaketh noneQ
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Daughter of Videha's monarch pardon if I do thee wrongR
Fickle is the faith of woman poison dealing is her tongueS
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And thy censure trust me Lady scathes me like a burning dartM
Free from guile is Lakshman's purpose free from sin is Lakshman's heartM
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Witness ye my truth of purpose unseen dwellers of the woodT
Witness I for Sita's safety by my elder's mandate stoodT
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Duteous to my queen and elder I have toiled and worked in vainJ
Dark suspicion and dishonour cast on me a needless stainJ
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Lady I obey thy mandate to my elder now I goH
Guardian Spirits of the forest watch thee from each secret foeH
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Omens dark and signs of danger meet my pained and aching sightF
May I see thee by thy Rama guarded by his conquering might '-

Valmiki



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