The Struggle To Freedom Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBC DEFGH IDJK LIMN OPBQ RST UVWX YZA2WB2 C2D2E2A F2G2VIH2G2

freedom's just a few miles awayA
not that far thoughB
the journey began a long long time agoB
lack of perseverance made it seem as though it's infiniteC
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a journey of just years now a journey approaching yearsD
the path's full of thorns gallops potholesE
they had journeyed for a very long timeF
up till nowG
with no hope of seeing light at the end of the tunnelH
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trampling day and night no shelter no food no waterI
for yearsD
at times the harsh wind blew by and took the little they hadJ
leaving them with nothingK
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once in a blue moon it rainedL
they'd fill up their vessels with waterI
but that's not allM
it didn't just rain hailstones fell from the sky and hit themN
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no coats to ease them of the coldO
no umbrella to shield against the falling hailstonesP
the thunder stroke alsoB
it wasn't an easy journey indeedQ
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pausing for a while was done at a great riskR
the hungry reptiles had catch up with then anytime soonS
some even crawled bruising their kneesT
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the old ones couldn't help but increase their pace a bitU
it was a survival of the fittest journeyV
the weak ones were left outW
vultures fed on their remainsX
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generations begat generationsY
still on the journey to freedomZ
they had no idea as to how close they are to their destinationA2
clothes worn outW
they couldn't help but knit a clothes out of the thorns that grew on both sides of their pathsB2
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the new borns had to suffer tooC2
not an iota was exempted of the shareD2
each everyone had to pay the price for the prizeE2
few miles awayA
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lesser pains to endureF2
just an extra pace requiredG2
a land flowing with milk honeyV
with paved roads and coniferous trees all overI
a dream of agesH2
about to be realisedG2

Tobi Olanipekun
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