Old John Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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Old John if I could sit with you a dayA
At Abram's feet upon the asphodelB
There while the grand old patriarch dreamed awayA
To you my life's whole progress I would tellB
To you would give accompt of what is wellB
What ill performed how used the trusted talentsC
Since last we heard the sound of Braddan bellB
A wheen bit callantsC
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You were not of our kin nor of our raceC
Old John nor of our church nor of our speechD
Yet what of strength or truth or tender graceC
I owe 'twas you that taught me Born to teachD
All nobleness whereof divines may preachD
And pedagogues may wag their tongues of ironE
I have no doubt you could have taught the leechD
That taught old ChironF
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For so it is the nascent souls may waitG
And lose the flexile aptness of their yearsC
But if one meets them at the opening gateG
Who fans their hopes and modifies their fearsC
Then thrives the soul the various growth appearsC
Or meet for sunny blooms or tempests' grapplingH
No wind uproots drought quells frost nips blight searsC
The well fed saplingH
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Old John do you remember how you ranI
Before the tide that choked the narrowing firthJ
When Cumbria took you ere you came to ManI
From distant Galloway that saw your birthJ
Methinks I hear you with athletic mirthJ
Deride the baffled sleuth hounds of the oceanF
As on you sped not having where on earthJ
You were a notionF
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What joy was mine I what straining of the kneesC
To test the peril of that strenuous mileB
To hear the clamour of the yelping seasC
And step for step to challenge you the whileB
And see the sunshine of your constant smileB
I loved you that you dared the splendid dangerK
I loved you that you landed on our IsleB
A helpless strangerK
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Old John Old John the air of heaven is calmL
No ripple curls upon the glassy seaC
But as you wave on high the golden palmL
Though love subdues the thrill of victoryC
You must remember how at TrollabyM
Your five foot one of sinew tough and pliantN
Threw Illiam of the Union Mills and heC
Was quite a giantN
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O wholesome food for keen and passionate heartsC
Tempering the fine pugnacity of youthO
With timely culture of all generous artsC
Rejecting menial tricks and wiles uncouthO
Old John your soul was valiant for the truthO
But ever 'twas a chivalrous contentionF
Love whispered justice and the mild eyed ruthO
Kissed grim dissensionF
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Old John if in the battle of this lifeP
I have not sought your precepts to fulfilB
If ever I have stirred ignoble strifeP
If ever struck foul blow as bent to killB
Not conquer by the love you bear me stillB
O intercede that I may be forgivenF
Stern Protestant not pray to saints I willB
To you in HeavenF
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Old John you must have much to do indeedQ
If I am all forgotten from your mindR
Ah blame me not I cannot hold a creedQ
That would impute you selfish or unkindR
Ask Luther Calvin ask the old man blindR
That painted Eden ask the grim ConfessionF
Of Augsburg what black error lurks behindR
Such intercessionF
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Old John you were an interceder hereS
For me you interceded with great criesC
How have I stood with mingled love and fearT
And not a little merriment My eyesC
Beheld you not Old John your groans and sighsC
And gasps I heard by listening at the gableB
Inside of which you knelt and shook the skiesC
But first the stableB
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It was a mighty wrastling with the LordU
The hot June air was feverish with the heatV
And agony of that great monochordV
Our old horse standing on his patient feetV
Ripped from the rack the hay that smelt so sweetV
And when there came a pause their breath soft pouringH
I heard the cows while prone upon the streetV
Our swine were snoringH
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You prayed for all but for my father mostV
The Maister as you called him that on rockW
Of sure foundation he might keep the postV
And by a change of metaphor might stockW
God's heritage with vines to endure the shockW
Pf time and sense being planted with his plantingH
That so another trope of all the flockW
Not one be wantingH
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Old John I think you must have met him thereX
My father somewhere in the fields of restV
From doubt enlarged released from mortal careX
Earth's troubles heave no more his tranquil breastV
O tell him what you once to me confessedV
That all the varied modes of rhetorick tryingH
You ever liked the Maister's sermons bestV
When he was cryingH
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Old John do you remember how we pickedV
Potatoes for you in the days of oldV
Bright flashed the grep and with its sharp prong prickedV
The pink fleshed tubers We were blithe and boldV
Dear John what jokes you cracked what tales you toldV
So garrulous to cheer your little midgesC
What time the setting sun shot shafts of goldV
Athwart the ridgesC
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And when the season changed and hay was mownF
You weighed the balance of our emulous powersC
How Maister Hugh was strong the ponderous coneF
To pitchfork but to build the fragrant towersC
Was none like Maister Wulliam Blessed hoursC
The empty cart we young ones scaled glad ridersC
And screamed at beetles exiled from their bowersC
And homeless spidersC
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But when the corn was ripe and truculent churlsC
Forbade us as we culled the cushaged stookH
Your eye flashed fire your voice was loosed in skinsC
Of rage Old Covenanter how could you lookH
The very genius of the pastoral crookH
Tythe twined established dominant In our ashesC
Still live our wonted fires You could not brookH
You said their fashesC
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A perfect treasury of rustic loreY
You were to me Old John how nature thrivesC
In horse or cow their points if less or moreY
Convex the grunter's spine the cackling wivesC
Of Chanticleer how marked the bird that divesC
And he that gobbles reddening all the crisesC
You told and ventures of their simple livesC
Also their pricesC
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The matchless tales your own great Wizard pennedV
To us were patent when you gave the keyH
I knew Montrose stern Clavers was my friendV
I carved the tombs with Old MortalityH
I sailed with Hatterick on the stormy seaH
Curled Cavalier and Roundhead atrabiliarY
The shifts of Caleb Balderstone to meH
Were quite familiarY
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But most of all where all was most I likedV
To hear the story of the martyrs' doomZ
The camp remote by stubborn hands bedykedV
The bones that bleached amid the heather bloomZ
The gray haired sire the intrepid maid for whomZ
Old Soiway piled his waters monumentalB
And gave that glorious heart a glorious tombZ
Worth Scotia's rentalB
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Old John such stories were to me a proofA2
That 'neath the dimpling of the temporal tidesC
A power is working still in our behoofA2
A primal power that in the world abidesC
In virgins' hearts it lives and tender bridesC
Confess it Veil your crests ye powers of evilB
It is an older power and it deridesC
Your vain upheavalB
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Old John do you remember InjebreckH
And that fine day we went to get a loadV
Of perfumed larch From many a ruddy fleckH
The resin oozed and dropped upon the roadV
And ever as we trudged you taught the codeV
Traditional of woodcraft Night came sparklingH
With all her gems and devious to TromodeV
The stream ran darklingH
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But we the westward height laborious clombZ
Then from Mount Rule descended on the StrangH
And saw afar the pleasant lights of homeZ
Whereat your cheering speech We'll nae be langH
Also a wondrous chirp of eld you sangH
Till when we came to Braddan Bridge the clingingH
Of that inveterate awe enforced a pangH
That stopped the singingH
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Yet when we gained the vantage of the hillB
And breathed more freely on the gentler slopeB2
Then quickly we recovered as men willB
For Life's sweet buoyancy with Death can copeB2
Being strung by Nature for that genial scopeB2
And so when you had ceased from your dejectionF
You talked with me of God and faith and hopeB2
And resurrectionF
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'Twas thus I learned to love the various manF
Rich patterned woven of all generous dyesC
Like to the tartan of some noble clanF
Blending the colours that alternate riseC
So ever 'tis refreshing to mine eyesC
To look beyond convention's flimsy trammelB
And see the native tints in anywiseC
Of God's enamelB
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Old John you were not of the CalvinistsC
The doctrine o' yElaction you declaredV
You gentlest of all gentle MethodistsC
A saul destroying doctrineF
Whoso dared God's mercy limit he must be preparedV
For something awful not propounded clearlyH
But dark as deepest doom that Dante baredV
Or very nearlyH
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On Sunday morning early to the classC
Then Matins as it's called in ritual puffA2
Correct then Evensong but let that passC
Our curate frowns Nor then had you enoughA2
But with your waistcoat pocket full of snuffA2
You scorned the flesh suppressed the stomach's clamourY
And went where you could get the rael stuffA2
Absolved from grammarY
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And who shall blame you JohnF
Our prayers are goodV
Compact of precious fragments passion clipsC
Of many souls cemented with the bloodV
Of suffering So we kiss them with the lipsC
Of awful love but when the irregular gripsC
Of zeal constrain the cleric breast or laicH
Into a thousand fiery shreds it ripsC
Our old mosaicH
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And so it was with you Old JohnF
The form Was excellent but you were timely nursedV
Upon a Cameronian lap the stormZ
Of that great strife inherited the thirstV
For God was in you from the very firstV
The rushing flood the energy ecstaticH
O'erwhelmed you that you could not choose but burstV
All bonds prelaticH
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No gentler soul e'er took its earthward flightV
From Heaven's high towers or clove the ethereal blueB
With softer wings or full of purer lightV
Sweet Saint Theresa bathed in virgin dewB
Your sister was but Jenny Geddes was tooB
The false Archbishop feared the accents surlyH
Of your firm voice you were John Knox and youB
Balfour of BurleyH
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Then is it wonderful in me you foundV
Disciple apt for every changing moodV
I also had a root in Scottish groundV
No tale of ancient wrong my spirit wooedV
In vain I loved the splendid fortitudeV
Although we served in different battalionsC
Your folk were Presbyterians mine were lewdV
EpiscopaliansC
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What joy it was to you the day I cameZ
To visit that dear home no longer mineF
I sat belated having seen the flameZ
Of sunset flash from well known windowsC
Nine Was struck upon the clock and yet no signF
Of my departure then some admirationF
Of what I purposed then I could divineF
A consultationF
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That I should sleep with you was their intentV
And so we slept being comrades old and triedV
It was to me a very sacramentV
As you lay hushed and reverent at my sideV
Your comely portance filled my soul with prideV
To think how human dignity surpassesC
The estimate of those who can't abideV
The lower classesC
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And severed by a curtain on a stringH
Slept Robert and his wife your daughter sleptV
Slept little Beenie and the bright eyed thingH
You Maggie called she to her mother creptV
And snuggled in the dark The night wind sweptV
Aboon the thatch came dawn and touched each rafterY
With tongue of gold then from the bed I leaptV
As light as laughterY
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But I must break my fast before I wentV
And so I sat and shared the pleasant mealB
And all were up and happy and contentV
And last you prayed May Fashion ne'er repealB
That self respect those manners pure and lealB
My countrymen I charge you never stain themZ
But as you love your Island's noblest wealB
Guard and maintain themZ
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O faithfullest my debt to you is longH
Life's grave complexity around me growsC
From you it comes if in the busy throngH
Some friends I have and have not any foesC
And even now when purple morning glowsC
And I am on the hills a night worn watchmanF
I see you in the centre of the roseC
Dear brave old ScotchmanF

Thomas Edward Brown



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