Old John Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABABBCBC CDCDDEDF GCGCCHCH IJIJJFJF CBCBBKBK LCLCMNCN COCOOFOF PBPBBFBF QRQRRFRF SCTCCBCB UVVVVHVH VWVWWHWH XVXVVHVH VVVVVCVC FCFCCCCC CHCHHCHC YCYCCCCC VHVHHYHY VZVZZBZB A2CA2CCBCB HVHVVHVH ZHZHHHHH BB2BB2B2FB2F FCFCCBCB CVCFVHVH CA2CA2A2YA2Y FVCVCCHCH FVZVVHVH VBVBBHBH VVVVVCVC ZFZCFFFF VVVVVCVC HVHVVYVY VBVBBZBZ HCHCCFCFOld John if I could sit with you a day | A |
At Abram's feet upon the asphodel | B |
There while the grand old patriarch dreamed away | A |
To you my life's whole progress I would tell | B |
To you would give accompt of what is well | B |
What ill performed how used the trusted talents | C |
Since last we heard the sound of Braddan bell | B |
A wheen bit callants | C |
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You were not of our kin nor of our race | C |
Old John nor of our church nor of our speech | D |
Yet what of strength or truth or tender grace | C |
I owe 'twas you that taught me Born to teach | D |
All nobleness whereof divines may preach | D |
And pedagogues may wag their tongues of iron | E |
I have no doubt you could have taught the leech | D |
That taught old Chiron | F |
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For so it is the nascent souls may wait | G |
And lose the flexile aptness of their years | C |
But if one meets them at the opening gate | G |
Who fans their hopes and modifies their fears | C |
Then thrives the soul the various growth appears | C |
Or meet for sunny blooms or tempests' grappling | H |
No wind uproots drought quells frost nips blight sears | C |
The well fed sapling | H |
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Old John do you remember how you ran | I |
Before the tide that choked the narrowing firth | J |
When Cumbria took you ere you came to Man | I |
From distant Galloway that saw your birth | J |
Methinks I hear you with athletic mirth | J |
Deride the baffled sleuth hounds of the ocean | F |
As on you sped not having where on earth | J |
You were a notion | F |
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What joy was mine I what straining of the knees | C |
To test the peril of that strenuous mile | B |
To hear the clamour of the yelping seas | C |
And step for step to challenge you the while | B |
And see the sunshine of your constant smile | B |
I loved you that you dared the splendid danger | K |
I loved you that you landed on our Isle | B |
A helpless stranger | K |
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Old John Old John the air of heaven is calm | L |
No ripple curls upon the glassy sea | C |
But as you wave on high the golden palm | L |
Though love subdues the thrill of victory | C |
You must remember how at Trollaby | M |
Your five foot one of sinew tough and pliant | N |
Threw Illiam of the Union Mills and he | C |
Was quite a giant | N |
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O wholesome food for keen and passionate hearts | C |
Tempering the fine pugnacity of youth | O |
With timely culture of all generous arts | C |
Rejecting menial tricks and wiles uncouth | O |
Old John your soul was valiant for the truth | O |
But ever 'twas a chivalrous contention | F |
Love whispered justice and the mild eyed ruth | O |
Kissed grim dissension | F |
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Old John if in the battle of this life | P |
I have not sought your precepts to fulfil | B |
If ever I have stirred ignoble strife | P |
If ever struck foul blow as bent to kill | B |
Not conquer by the love you bear me still | B |
O intercede that I may be forgiven | F |
Stern Protestant not pray to saints I will | B |
To you in Heaven | F |
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Old John you must have much to do indeed | Q |
If I am all forgotten from your mind | R |
Ah blame me not I cannot hold a creed | Q |
That would impute you selfish or unkind | R |
Ask Luther Calvin ask the old man blind | R |
That painted Eden ask the grim Confession | F |
Of Augsburg what black error lurks behind | R |
Such intercession | F |
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Old John you were an interceder here | S |
For me you interceded with great cries | C |
How have I stood with mingled love and fear | T |
And not a little merriment My eyes | C |
Beheld you not Old John your groans and sighs | C |
And gasps I heard by listening at the gable | B |
Inside of which you knelt and shook the skies | C |
But first the stable | B |
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It was a mighty wrastling with the Lord | U |
The hot June air was feverish with the heat | V |
And agony of that great monochord | V |
Our old horse standing on his patient feet | V |
Ripped from the rack the hay that smelt so sweet | V |
And when there came a pause their breath soft pouring | H |
I heard the cows while prone upon the street | V |
Our swine were snoring | H |
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You prayed for all but for my father most | V |
The Maister as you called him that on rock | W |
Of sure foundation he might keep the post | V |
And by a change of metaphor might stock | W |
God's heritage with vines to endure the shock | W |
Pf time and sense being planted with his planting | H |
That so another trope of all the flock | W |
Not one be wanting | H |
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Old John I think you must have met him there | X |
My father somewhere in the fields of rest | V |
From doubt enlarged released from mortal care | X |
Earth's troubles heave no more his tranquil breast | V |
O tell him what you once to me confessed | V |
That all the varied modes of rhetorick trying | H |
You ever liked the Maister's sermons best | V |
When he was crying | H |
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Old John do you remember how we picked | V |
Potatoes for you in the days of old | V |
Bright flashed the grep and with its sharp prong pricked | V |
The pink fleshed tubers We were blithe and bold | V |
Dear John what jokes you cracked what tales you told | V |
So garrulous to cheer your little midges | C |
What time the setting sun shot shafts of gold | V |
Athwart the ridges | C |
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And when the season changed and hay was mown | F |
You weighed the balance of our emulous powers | C |
How Maister Hugh was strong the ponderous cone | F |
To pitchfork but to build the fragrant towers | C |
Was none like Maister Wulliam Blessed hours | C |
The empty cart we young ones scaled glad riders | C |
And screamed at beetles exiled from their bowers | C |
And homeless spiders | C |
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But when the corn was ripe and truculent churls | C |
Forbade us as we culled the cushaged stook | H |
Your eye flashed fire your voice was loosed in skins | C |
Of rage Old Covenanter how could you look | H |
The very genius of the pastoral crook | H |
Tythe twined established dominant In our ashes | C |
Still live our wonted fires You could not brook | H |
You said their fashes | C |
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A perfect treasury of rustic lore | Y |
You were to me Old John how nature thrives | C |
In horse or cow their points if less or more | Y |
Convex the grunter's spine the cackling wives | C |
Of Chanticleer how marked the bird that dives | C |
And he that gobbles reddening all the crises | C |
You told and ventures of their simple lives | C |
Also their prices | C |
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The matchless tales your own great Wizard penned | V |
To us were patent when you gave the key | H |
I knew Montrose stern Clavers was my friend | V |
I carved the tombs with Old Mortality | H |
I sailed with Hatterick on the stormy sea | H |
Curled Cavalier and Roundhead atrabiliar | Y |
The shifts of Caleb Balderstone to me | H |
Were quite familiar | Y |
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But most of all where all was most I liked | V |
To hear the story of the martyrs' doom | Z |
The camp remote by stubborn hands bedyked | V |
The bones that bleached amid the heather bloom | Z |
The gray haired sire the intrepid maid for whom | Z |
Old Soiway piled his waters monumental | B |
And gave that glorious heart a glorious tomb | Z |
Worth Scotia's rental | B |
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Old John such stories were to me a proof | A2 |
That 'neath the dimpling of the temporal tides | C |
A power is working still in our behoof | A2 |
A primal power that in the world abides | C |
In virgins' hearts it lives and tender brides | C |
Confess it Veil your crests ye powers of evil | B |
It is an older power and it derides | C |
Your vain upheaval | B |
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Old John do you remember Injebreck | H |
And that fine day we went to get a load | V |
Of perfumed larch From many a ruddy fleck | H |
The resin oozed and dropped upon the road | V |
And ever as we trudged you taught the code | V |
Traditional of woodcraft Night came sparkling | H |
With all her gems and devious to Tromode | V |
The stream ran darkling | H |
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But we the westward height laborious clomb | Z |
Then from Mount Rule descended on the Strang | H |
And saw afar the pleasant lights of home | Z |
Whereat your cheering speech We'll nae be lang | H |
Also a wondrous chirp of eld you sang | H |
Till when we came to Braddan Bridge the clinging | H |
Of that inveterate awe enforced a pang | H |
That stopped the singing | H |
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Yet when we gained the vantage of the hill | B |
And breathed more freely on the gentler slope | B2 |
Then quickly we recovered as men will | B |
For Life's sweet buoyancy with Death can cope | B2 |
Being strung by Nature for that genial scope | B2 |
And so when you had ceased from your dejection | F |
You talked with me of God and faith and hope | B2 |
And resurrection | F |
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'Twas thus I learned to love the various man | F |
Rich patterned woven of all generous dyes | C |
Like to the tartan of some noble clan | F |
Blending the colours that alternate rise | C |
So ever 'tis refreshing to mine eyes | C |
To look beyond convention's flimsy trammel | B |
And see the native tints in anywise | C |
Of God's enamel | B |
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Old John you were not of the Calvinists | C |
The doctrine o' yElaction you declared | V |
You gentlest of all gentle Methodists | C |
A saul destroying doctrine | F |
Whoso dared God's mercy limit he must be prepared | V |
For something awful not propounded clearly | H |
But dark as deepest doom that Dante bared | V |
Or very nearly | H |
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On Sunday morning early to the class | C |
Then Matins as it's called in ritual puff | A2 |
Correct then Evensong but let that pass | C |
Our curate frowns Nor then had you enough | A2 |
But with your waistcoat pocket full of snuff | A2 |
You scorned the flesh suppressed the stomach's clamour | Y |
And went where you could get the rael stuff | A2 |
Absolved from grammar | Y |
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And who shall blame you John | F |
Our prayers are good | V |
Compact of precious fragments passion clips | C |
Of many souls cemented with the blood | V |
Of suffering So we kiss them with the lips | C |
Of awful love but when the irregular grips | C |
Of zeal constrain the cleric breast or laic | H |
Into a thousand fiery shreds it rips | C |
Our old mosaic | H |
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And so it was with you Old John | F |
The form Was excellent but you were timely nursed | V |
Upon a Cameronian lap the storm | Z |
Of that great strife inherited the thirst | V |
For God was in you from the very first | V |
The rushing flood the energy ecstatic | H |
O'erwhelmed you that you could not choose but burst | V |
All bonds prelatic | H |
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No gentler soul e'er took its earthward flight | V |
From Heaven's high towers or clove the ethereal blue | B |
With softer wings or full of purer light | V |
Sweet Saint Theresa bathed in virgin dew | B |
Your sister was but Jenny Geddes was too | B |
The false Archbishop feared the accents surly | H |
Of your firm voice you were John Knox and you | B |
Balfour of Burley | H |
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Then is it wonderful in me you found | V |
Disciple apt for every changing mood | V |
I also had a root in Scottish ground | V |
No tale of ancient wrong my spirit wooed | V |
In vain I loved the splendid fortitude | V |
Although we served in different battalions | C |
Your folk were Presbyterians mine were lewd | V |
Episcopalians | C |
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What joy it was to you the day I came | Z |
To visit that dear home no longer mine | F |
I sat belated having seen the flame | Z |
Of sunset flash from well known windows | C |
Nine Was struck upon the clock and yet no sign | F |
Of my departure then some admiration | F |
Of what I purposed then I could divine | F |
A consultation | F |
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That I should sleep with you was their intent | V |
And so we slept being comrades old and tried | V |
It was to me a very sacrament | V |
As you lay hushed and reverent at my side | V |
Your comely portance filled my soul with pride | V |
To think how human dignity surpasses | C |
The estimate of those who can't abide | V |
The lower classes | C |
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And severed by a curtain on a string | H |
Slept Robert and his wife your daughter slept | V |
Slept little Beenie and the bright eyed thing | H |
You Maggie called she to her mother crept | V |
And snuggled in the dark The night wind swept | V |
Aboon the thatch came dawn and touched each rafter | Y |
With tongue of gold then from the bed I leapt | V |
As light as laughter | Y |
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But I must break my fast before I went | V |
And so I sat and shared the pleasant meal | B |
And all were up and happy and content | V |
And last you prayed May Fashion ne'er repeal | B |
That self respect those manners pure and leal | B |
My countrymen I charge you never stain them | Z |
But as you love your Island's noblest weal | B |
Guard and maintain them | Z |
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O faithfullest my debt to you is long | H |
Life's grave complexity around me grows | C |
From you it comes if in the busy throng | H |
Some friends I have and have not any foes | C |
And even now when purple morning glows | C |
And I am on the hills a night worn watchman | F |
I see you in the centre of the rose | C |
Dear brave old Scotchman | F |
Thomas Edward Brown
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