To Your Satisfaction Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEBFGH IJKLMI BGNO MLP QQQ

A damsel in distress I amA
To your satisfactionB
I wish I knew more of this but the sky was too limitedC
Paying my bills to this UniverseD
For all that love and all the hatred I was always so capable ofE
To your satisfactionB
An animal too sweetF
sacrificed a much too sweet pitiful animal supernaturalG
Too bitter a causeH
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And I am also a feral beastI
Ferociously eating my sandwichJ
My part of the sandwich you won't touchK
My share of wonders all mine all mineL
God sorry I am too forgivingM
Yes you may have it you poor much more famished beastI
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And I am a teller of fortuneB
Your life was all too beautifulG
You may live in the pastN
The future is for the ones who want to last foreverO
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And I am a changer of pasts combiningM
Your Universe lost with mineL
My planet a place for you only if apartP
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But I am lovable oh well I used to beQ
Maybe I don't remember correctlyQ
How things should beQ

Theodora Oniceanu

Poet's note: One of my "socially ironical poem" _ social work always works best for our matters of soul and order of the Universe. My hope is for you to have the fun you deserve, always!




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