A Real Mom Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBCD EFEG HIBJKLM NO

I always wanted someone to go shopping withA
Get Mani PedisB
Talk about boysB
A built in best friend that was exactly what I was looking forC
The moment I set foot on EarthD
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Always seen girls and their momE
With a great bondF
Always wondered why that can't be me and my momE
Instead I got lies and was mistreatedG
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Nothing was ever good enoughH
Always overlookedI
Never was a good time can't even remember one of thoseB
Like the last time she said I love youJ
And really meant itK
Hugged me and said she was proudL
Something I would definitely remember but sadly I don'tM
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Guess I wasn't meant to have a built in best friendN
Instead a mommy who tells lies and it's quick to leave and say bye byeO

Taliyah Edwards
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 10/02/2025

Poet's note: This poem is about wanting that special relationship with a mother figure and not being able to have that. And I wrote it October 1st 2025.




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