Tommy Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBBBCCC DDEEBBBB FFBBBGGG BBEEBBBB HIEEBBEE

I went into a public 'ouse to get a pint o' beerA
The publican 'e up an' sez quot We serve no red coats here quotB
The girls be'ind the bar they laughed an' giggled fit to dieB
I outs into the street again an' to myself sez IB
O it's Tommy this an' Tommy that an' quot Tommy go away quotB
But it's quot Thank you Mister Atkins quot when the band begins to playC
The band begins to play my boys the band begins to playC
O it's quot Thank you Mister Atkins quot when the band begins to playC
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I went into a theatre as sober as could beD
They gave a drunk civilian room but 'adn't none for meD
They sent me to the gallery or round the music 'allsE
But when it comes to fightin' Lord they'll shove me in the stallsE
For it's Tommy this an' Tommy that an' quot Tommy wait outside quotB
But it's quot Special train for Atkins quot when the trooper's on the tideB
The troopship's on the tide my boys the troopship's on the tideB
O it's quot Special train for Atkins quot when the trooper's on the tideB
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Yes makin' mock o' uniforms that guard you while you sleepF
Is cheaper than them uniforms an' they're starvation cheapF
An' hustlin' drunken soldiers when they're goin' large a bitB
Is five times better business than paradin' in full kitB
Then it's Tommy this an' Tommy that an' quot Tommy 'ow's yer soul quotB
But it's quot Thin red line of 'eroes quot when the drums begin to rollG
The drums begin to roll my boys the drums begin to rollG
O it's quot Thin red line of 'eroes quot when the drums begin to rollG
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We aren't no thin red 'eroes nor we aren't no blackguards tooB
But single men in barricks most remarkable like youB
An' if sometimes our conduck isn't all your fancy paintsE
Why single men in barricks don't grow into plaster saintsE
While it's Tommy this an' Tommy that an' quot Tommy fall be'ind quotB
But it's quot Please to walk in front sir quot when there's trouble in the windB
There's trouble in the wind my boys there's trouble in the windB
O it's quot Please to walk in front sir quot when there's trouble in the windB
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You talk o' better food for us an' schools an' fires an' allH
We'll wait for extry rations if you treat us rationalI
Don't mess about the cook room slops but prove it to our faceE
The Widow's Uniform is not the soldier man's disgraceE
For it's Tommy this an' Tommy that an' quot Chuck him out the brute quotB
But it's quot Saviour of 'is country quot when the guns begin to shootB
An' it's Tommy this an' Tommy that an' anything you pleaseE
An' Tommy ain't a bloomin' fool you bet that Tommy seesE

Rudyard Kipling



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