Poseidon's Low Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABB CDEE FFGG HHII JJKK LLMM KKNN

When the robust and Brass bound Man commissioned first for seaA
His fragile raft Poseidon laughed and Mariner said heA
Behold a Law immutable I lay on thee and thineB
That never shall ye act or tell a falsehood at my shrineB
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Let Zeus adjudge your landward kin whose votive meal and saleC
At easy cheated altars win oblivion for the faultD
But you the unhoodwinked wave shall test the immediate gulf condemnE
Except ye owe the Fates a jest be slow to jest with themE
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Ye shall not clear by Greekly speech nor cozen from your pathF
The twinkling shoal the leeward beach or Hadria's white lipped wrathF
Nor tempt with painted cloth for wood my fraud avenging hostsG
Nor make at all or all make good your bulwarks and your boastsG
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Now and henceforward serve unshod through wet and wakeful shiftsH
A present and oppressive God but take to aid my giftsH
The wide and windward opening eye the large and lavish handI
The soul that cannot tell a lie except upon the landI
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In dromond and in catafract wet wakeful windward eyedJ
He kept Poseidon's Law intact his ship and freight besideJ
But once discharged the dromond's hold the bireme beached once moreK
Splendaciously mendacious rolled the Brass bound Man ashoreK
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The thranite now and thalamite are pressures low and highL
And where three hundred blades bit white the twin propellers plyL
The God that hailed the keel that sailed are changed beyond recallM
But the robust and Brass bound Man he is not changed at allM
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From Punt returned from Phormio's Fleet from Javan and GadireK
He strongly occupies the seat about the tavern fireK
And moist with much Falernian or smoked Massilian juiceN
Revenges there the Brass bound Man his long enforced truceN

Rudyard Kipling



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