Abstinence Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD DEFGHI JKDLFHM NOEJBPQB DRBSJTUE B

The monk who's travelled and tiredA
Sits below the mighty oak treeB
And he starts telling his tellC
Of the philosophy of abstinence as usualD
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The oak tree smiles mildly and bends a littleD
The sun is burning on top whole sky is on fireE
Expanding it's torn branches and leafsF
The oak tree collects it's half burnt soulG
And tries to spread more shadowH
Over the tired monk Stopping the heat at bayI
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The hunger is ravishingJ
In the stomach of the monk by nowK
Unexplainable UncontrollableD
The oak tree bends a little againL
Expanding it's torn branches and leafsF
And tries to spread more shadowH
Over the hungry monk With a mighty willM
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And monk starts collecting fallen twigsN
He also cut few branches and burnt leavesO
To make a fire To make supperE
The fire keeps burningJ
The abstinence loose it's integrityB
Like ashes on the burnt woodP
The monk goes into deep sleepQ
Below the broken shadow of the oak treeB
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The oak tree smiles mildly and bends a littleD
The hunger in the monk's stomach vanishesR
The pain of abstinence vanishes suddenlyB
And the oak tree it's broken branchesS
burnt leaves Keeps smilingJ
On the philosophy of hunger over abstinenceT
And the Monk sleeps like a childU
Forgetting his philosophy over hungerE
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Instagram ID abstruse poetryB

Rohit Kulkarni
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 08/09/2020

Poet's note: This poem about the failure of philosophy over basis need




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