Was It You? Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABACDEDE FGFGHIHI JKJKLMLM FNONPIPI QRQRASA FTFTUIUI VWVXYIYIHullo young Jones with your tie so gay | A |
And your pen behind your ear | B |
Will you mark my cheque in the usual way | A |
For I'm overdrawn I fear | C |
Then you look at me in a manner bland | D |
As you turn your ledger's leaves | E |
And you hand it back with a soft white hand | D |
And the air of a man who grieves | E |
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Was it you young Jones was it you I saw | F |
And I think I see you yet | G |
With a live bomb gripped in your grimy paw | F |
And your face to the parapet | G |
With your lips asnarl and your eyes gone mad | H |
With a fury that thrilled you through | I |
Oh I look at you now and I think my lad | H |
Was it you young Jones was it you | I |
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Hullo young Smith with your well fed look | J |
And your coat of dapper fit | K |
Will you recommend me a decent book | J |
With nothing of War in it | K |
Then you smile as you polish a finger nail | L |
And your eyes serenely roam | M |
And you suavely hand me a thrilling tale | L |
By a man who stayed at home | M |
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Was it you young Smith was it you I saw | F |
In the battle's storm and stench | N |
With a roar of rage and a wound red raw | O |
Leap into the reeking trench | N |
As you stood like a fiend on the firing shelf | P |
And you stabbed and hacked and slew | I |
Oh I look at you and I ask myself | P |
Was it you young Smith was it you | I |
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Hullo old Brown with your ruddy cheek | Q |
And your tummy's rounded swell | R |
Your garden's looking jolly chic | Q |
And your kiddies awf'ly well | R |
Then you beam at me in your cheery way | A |
As you swing your water can | S |
And you mop your brow and you blithely say | A |
'What about golf old man ' | - |
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Was it you old Brown was it you I saw | F |
Like a bull dog stick to your gun | T |
A cursing devil of fang and claw | F |
When the rest were on the run | T |
Your eyes aflame with the battle hate | U |
As you sit in the family pew | I |
And I see you rising to pass the plate | U |
I ask Old Brown was it you | I |
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Was it me and you Was it you and me | V |
Is that grammar or is it not | W |
Who groveled in filth and misery | V |
Who gloried and groused and fought | X |
Which is the wrong and which is the right | Y |
Which is the false and the true | I |
The man of peace or the man of fight | Y |
Which is the ME and the YOU | I |
Robert Service
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