The Black Dudeen Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCBDEFFG HHIJBBBBKKLLMM NNOOPPQQAARR SSTUVVWWXXYY ZZA2A2B2C2D2D2E2E2 BBF2F2BBBBA2A2C2C2G2 G2H2H2BB H2BOBC2E2C2C2E2Humping it here in the dug out | A |
Sucking me black dudeen | B |
I'd like to say in a general way | C |
There's nothing like Nickyteen | B |
There's nothing like Nickyteen me boys | D |
Be it pipes or snipes or cigars | E |
So be sure that a bloke | F |
Has plenty to smoke | F |
If you wants him to fight your wars | G |
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When I've eat my fill and my belt is snug | H |
I begin to think of my baccy plug | H |
I whittle a fill in my horny palm | I |
And the bowl of me old clay pipe I cram | J |
I trim the edges I tamp it down | B |
I nurse a light with an anxious frown | B |
I begin to draw and my cheeks tuck in | B |
And all my face is a blissful grin | B |
And up in a cloud the good smoke goes | K |
And the good pipe glimmers and fades and glows | K |
In its throat it chuckles a cheery song | L |
For I likes it hot and I likes it strong | L |
Oh it's good is grub when you're feeling hollow | M |
But the best of a meal's the smoke to follow | M |
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There was Micky and me on a night patrol | N |
Having to hide in a fizz bang hole | N |
And sure I thought I was worse than dead | O |
Wi' them crump crumps hustlin' over me head | O |
Sure I thought 'twas the dirty spot | P |
Hammer and tongs till the air was hot | P |
And mind you water up to your knees | Q |
And cold A monkey of brass would freeze | Q |
And if we ventured our noses out | A |
A typewriter clattered its pills about | A |
The Field of Glory Well I don't think | R |
I'd sooner be safe and snug in clink | R |
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Then Micky he goes and he cops one bad | S |
He always was having ill luck poor lad | S |
Says he Old chummy I'm booked right through | T |
Death and me 'as a wrongday voo | U |
But 'aven't you got a pinch of shag | V |
I'd sell me perishin' soul for a fag | V |
And there he shivered and cussed his luck | W |
So I gave him me old black pipe to suck | W |
And he heaves a sigh and he takes to it | X |
Like a babby takes to his mammy's tit | X |
Like an infant takes to his mother's breast | Y |
Poor little Micky he went to rest | Y |
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But the dawn was near though the night was black | Z |
So I left him there and I started back | Z |
And I laughed as the silly old bullets came | A2 |
For the bullet ain't made wot's got me name | A2 |
Yet some of 'em buzzed onhealthily near | B2 |
And one little blighter just chipped me ear | C2 |
But there I got to the trench all right | D2 |
When sudden I jumped wi' a start o' fright | D2 |
And a word that doesn't look well in type | E2 |
I'd clean forgotten me old clay pipe | E2 |
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So I had to do it all over again | B |
Crawling out on that filthy plain | B |
Through shells and bombs and bullets and all | F2 |
Only this time I do not crawl | F2 |
I run like a man wot's missing a train | B |
Or a tom cat caught in a plump of rain | B |
I hear the spit of a quick fire gun | B |
Tickle my heels but I run I run | B |
Through crash and crackle and flicker and flame | A2 |
Oh the packet ain't issued wot's got me name | A2 |
I run like a man that's no ideer | C2 |
Of hunting around for a sooveneer | C2 |
I run bang into a German chap | G2 |
And he stares like an owl so I bash his map | G2 |
And just to show him that I'm his boss | H2 |
I gives him a kick on the parados | H2 |
And I marches him back with me all serene | B |
Wiv tucked in me grup me old dudeen | B |
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Sitting here in the trenches | H2 |
Me heart's a splittin' with spleen | B |
For a parcel o' lead comes missing me head | O |
But it smashes me old dudeen | B |
God blast that red headed sniper | C2 |
I'll give him somethin' to snipe | E2 |
Before the war's through | C2 |
Just see how I do | C2 |
That blighter that smashed me pipe | E2 |
Robert Service
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