Room 4: The Painter Chap Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABCC DEDED FGHGIJJKJILMNMNM OPOPP QRQQS MTTMUU VDVDD WXWXX YMYMVV UCUCUPZP

He gives me such a bold and curious lookA
That young American across the wayB
As if he'd like to put me in a bookA
Fancies himself a poet so they sayB
Ah well He'll make no document of meC
I lock my door Ha ha Now none shall seeC
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Pictures just pictures piled from roof to floorD
Each one a bit of me a dream fulfilledE
A vision of the beauty I adoreD
My own poor glimpse of glory passion thrilledE
But now my money's gone I paint no moreD
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For three days past I have not tasted foodF
The jeweled colors run I reel I faintG
They tell me that my pictures are no goodH
Just crude and childish daubs a waste of paintG
I burned to throw on canvas all I sawI
Twilight on water tenderness of treesJ
Wet sands at sunset and the smoking seasJ
The peace of valleys and the mountain's aweK
Emotion swayed me at the thought of theseJ
I sought to paint ere I had learned to drawI
And that's the troubleL
Ah well here am IM
Facing my failure after struggle longN
And there they are my croutes that none will buyM
And doubtless they are right and I am wrongN
Well when one's lost one's faith it's time to dieM
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This knife will do and now to slash and slashO
Rip them to ribands rend them every oneP
My dreams and visions tear and stab and gashO
So that their crudeness may be known to noneP
Poor miserable daubs Ah there it's doneP
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And now to close my little window tightQ
Lo in the dusking sky serenely setR
The evening star is like a beacon brightQ
And see to keep her tender tryst with nightQ
How Paris veils herself in violetS
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Oh why does God create such men as IM
All pride and passion and divine desireT
Raw quivering nerve stuff and devouring fireT
Foredoomed to failure though they try and tryM
Abortive blindly to destruction hurledU
Unfound unfit to grapple with the worldU
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And now to light my wheezy jet of gasV
Chink up the window crannies and the doorD
So that no single breath of air may passV
So that I'm sealed air tight from roof to floorD
There there that's done and now there's nothing moreD
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Look at the city's myriad lamps a shineW
See the calm moon is launching into spaceX
There will be darkness in these eyes of mineW
Ere it can climb to shine upon my faceX
Oh it will find such peace upon my faceX
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City of Beauty I have loved you wellY
A laugh or two I've had but many a sighM
I've run with you the scale from Heav'n to HellY
Paris I love you still good by good byM
Thus it all ends unhappily alasV
It's time to sleep and now blow out the gasV
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Now there's that little midinetteU
Who goes to work each morning dailyC
I choose to call her Blithe BabetteU
Because she's always humming gailyC
And though the Goddess Comme il fautU
May look on her with prim expressionP
It's Pagan Paris where you knowZ
The queen of virtues is DiscretionP

Robert Service



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