My Picture Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABCBCB DEDEFDFD GBGBHIJI

I made a picture all my heartA
I put in it and all I knewB
Of canvas cunning and of ArtA
Of tenderness and passion trueB
A worshipped Master came to seeC
Oh he was kind and gentle tooB
He studied it with sympathyC
And sensed what I had sought to doB
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Said he Your paint is fresh and fairD
And I can praise it without ceaseE
And yet a touch just here and thereD
Would make of it a masterpieceE
He took the brush from out my handF
He touched it here he touched it thereD
So well he seemed to understandF
And momently it grew more fairD
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Oh there was nothing I could sayG
And there was nothing I could doB
I thanked him and he went his wayG
And then I slashed my picture throughB
For though his brush with soft caressH
Had made my daub a thing divineI
Oh God I wept with bitternessJ
It wasn't mine it wasn't mineI

Robert Service



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