My Mate Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABABCCCC DBDBCCCC EBEBFCFC GBGBGCGC CCCCCCCC HCHCBCBC

I've been sittin' starin' starin' at 'is muddy pair of bootsA
And tryin' to convince meself it's 'imB
Look out there lad That sniper 'e's a dysey when 'e shootsA
'E'll be layin' of you out the same as JimB
Jim as lies there in the dug out wiv 'is blanket round 'is 'eadC
To keep 'is brains from mixin' wiv the mudC
And 'is face as white as putty and 'is overcoat all redC
Like 'e's spilt a bloomin' paint pot but it's bloodC
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And I'm tryin' to remember of a time we wasn't palsD
'Ow often we've played 'ookey 'im and meB
And sometimes it was music 'alls and sometimes it was galsD
And even there we 'ad no disagreeB
For when 'e copped Mariar Jones the one I liked the bestC
I shook 'is 'and and loaned 'im 'arf a quidC
I saw 'im through the parson's job I 'elped 'im make 'is nestC
I even stood god farther to the kidC
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So when the war broke out sez 'e Well wot abaht it JoeE
Well wot abaht it lad sez I to 'imB
'Is missis made a awful fuss but 'e was mad to goE
'E always was 'igh sperrited was JimB
Well none of it's been 'eaven and the most of it's been 'ellF
But we've shared our baccy and we've 'alved our breadC
We'd all the luck at Wipers and we shaved through Noove ChapelleF
And that snipin' barstard gits 'im on the 'eadC
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Now wot I wants to know is why it wasn't me was tookG
I've only got meself 'e stands for threeB
I'm plainer than a louse while 'e was 'andsome as a dookG
'E always WAS a better man than meB
'E was goin' 'ome next Toosday 'e was 'appy as a larkG
And 'e'd just received a letter from 'is kidC
And 'e struck a match to show me as we stood there in the darkG
When that bleedin' bullet got 'im on the lidC
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'E was killed so awful sudden that 'e 'adn't time to dieC
'E sorto jumped and came down wiv a thudC
Them corpsy lookin' star shells kept a streamin' in the skyC
And there 'e lay like nothin' in the mudC
And there 'e lay so quiet wiv no mansard to 'is 'eadC
And I'm sick and blamed if I can understandC
The pots of 'alf and 'alf we've 'ad and ZIP like that 'e's deadC
Wiv the letter of 'is nipper in 'is 'andC
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There's some as fights for freedom and there's some as fights for funH
But me my lad I fights for bleedin' 'ateC
You can blame the war and blast it but I 'opes it won't be doneH
Till I gets the bloomin' blood price for me mateC
It'll take a bit o' bayonet to level up for JimB
Then if I'm spared I think I'll 'ave a bidC
Wiv 'er that was Mariar Jones to take the place of 'imB
To sorter be a farther to 'is kidC

Robert Service



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