My Friends Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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The man above was a murderer the man below was a thiefA
And I lay there in the bunk between ailing beyond beliefA
A weary armful of skin and bone wasted with pain and griefA
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My feet were froze and the lifeless toes were purple and green and grayB
The little flesh that clung to my bones you could punch it in holes like clayB
The skin on my gums was a sullen black and slowly peeling awayB
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I was sure enough in a direful fix and often I wondered whyC
They did not take the chance that was left and leave me alone to dieC
Or finish me off with a dose of dope so utterly lost was IC
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But no they brewed me the green spruce tea and nursed me there like a childD
And the homicide he was good to me and bathed my sores and smiledD
And the thief he starved that I might be fed and his eyes were kind and mildD
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Yet they were woefully wicked men and often at night in painE
I heard the murderer speak of his deed and dream it over againF
I heard the poor thief sorrowing for the dead self he had slainE
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I'll never forget that bitter dawn so evil askew and grayB
When they wrapped me round in the skins of beasts and they bore me to a sleighB
And we started out with the nearest post an hundred miles awayB
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I'll never forget the trail they broke with its tense unuttered woeG
And the crunch crunch crunch as their snowshoes sank through the crust of the hollow snowG
And my breath would fail and every beat of my heart was like a blowG
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And oftentimes I would die the death yet wake up to life anewH
The sun would be all ablaze on the waste and the sky a blighting blueH
And the tears would rise in my snow blind eyes and furrow my cheeks like dewH
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And the camps we made when their strength outplayed and the day was pinched and wanI
And oh the joy of that blessed halt and how I did dread the dawnJ
And how I hated the weary men who rose and dragged me onI
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And oh how I begged to rest to rest the snow was so sweet a shroudK
And oh how I cried when they urged me on cried and cursed them aloudK
Yet on they strained all racked and pained and sorely their backs were bowedK
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And then it was all like a lurid dream and I prayed for a swift releaseL
From the ruthless ones who would not leave me to die alone in peaceL
Till I wakened up and I found myself at the post of the Mounted PoliceL
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And there was my friend the murderer and there was my friend the thiefA
With bracelets of steel around their wrists and wicked beyond beliefA
But when they come to God's judgment seat may I be allowed the briefA

Robert Service



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