Barb-wire Bill Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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At dawn of day the white land lay all gruesome like and grimA
When Bill Mc'Gee he says to me We've got to do it JimA
We've got to make Fort Liard quick I know the river's badB
But oh the little woman's sick why don't you savvy ladB
And me Well yes I must confess it wasn't hard to seeC
Their little family group of two would soon be one of threeC
And so I answered careless like Why Bill you don't supposeD
I'm scared of that there 'babbling brook' Whatever you say goesD
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A real live man was Barb wire Bill with insides copper linedE
For barb wire was the brand of hooch to which he most inclinedE
They knew him far his igloos are on Kittiegazuit strandF
They knew him well the tribes who dwell within the Barren LandF
From Koyokuk to Kuskoquim his fame was everywhereG
And he did love all life above that little Julie ClaireG
The lithe white slave girl he had bought for seven hundred skinsH
And taken to his wickiup to make his moccasinsH
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We crawled down to the river bank and feeble folk were weC
That Julie Claire from God knows where and Barb wire Bill and meC
From shore to shore we heard the roar the heaving ice floes makeI
And loud we laughed and launched our raft and followed in their wakeI
The river swept and seethed and leapt and caught us in its strideJ
And on we hurled amid a world that crashed on every sideJ
With sullen din the banks caved in the shore ice lanced the streamK
The naked floes like spooks arose all jiggling and agleamK
Black anchor ice of strange device shot upward from its bedL
As night and day we cleft our way and arrow like we spedL
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But Faster still cried Barb wire Bill and looked the live long dayM
In dull despair at Julie Claire as white like death she layM
And sometimes he would seem to pray and sometimes seem to curseN
And bent above with eyes of love yet ever she grew worseN
And as we plunged and leapt and lunged her face was plucked with painO
And I could feel his nerves of steel a quiver at the strainO
And in the night he gripped me tight as I lay fast asleepP
The river's kicking like a steer run out the forward sweepP
That's Hell gate Canyon right ahead I know of old its roarQ
And I'll be damned the ice is jammed We've GOT to make the shoreQ
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With one wild leap I gripped the sweep The night was black as sinR
The float ice crashed and ripped and smashed and stunned us with its dinR
And near and near and clear and clear I heard the canyon boomS
And swift and strong we swept along to meet our awful doomS
And as with dread I glimpsed ahead the death that waited thereG
My only thought was of the girl the little Julie ClaireG
And so like demon mad with fear I panted at the oarQ
And foot by foot and inch by inch we worked the raft ashoreQ
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The bank was staked with grinding ice and as we scraped and crashedT
I only knew one thing to do and through my mind it flashedT
Yet while I groped to find the rope I heard Bill's savage cryU
That's my job lad It's me that jumps I'll snub this raft or dieU
I saw him leap I saw him creep I saw him gain the landF
I saw him crawl I saw him fall then run with rope in handF
And then the darkness gulped him up and down we dashed once moreQ
And nearer nearer drew the jam and thunder like its roarQ
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Oh God all's lost from Julie Claire there came a wail of painO
And then the rope grew sudden taut and quivered at the strainO
It slacked and slipped it whined and gripped and oh I held my breathV
And there we hung and there we swung right in the jaws of deathV
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A little strand of hempen rope and how I watched it thereG
With all around a hell of sound and darkness and despairG
A little strand of hempen rope I watched it all aloneW
And somewhere in the dark behind I heard a woman moanW
And somewhere in the dark ahead I heard a man cry outX
Then silence silence silence fell and mocked my hollow shoutX
And yet once more from out the shore I heard that cry of painO
A moan of mortal agony then all was still againY
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That night was hell with all the frills and when the dawn broke dimA
I saw a lean and level land but never sign of himA
I saw a flat and frozen shore of hideous deviceZ
I saw a long drawn strand of rope that vanished through the iceZ
And on that treeless rockless shore I found my partner deadL
No place was there to snub the raft so he had served insteadL
And with the rope lashed round his waist in last defiant fightA2
He'd thrown himself beneath the ice that closed and gripped him tightA2
And there he'd held us back from death as fast in death he layM
Say boys I'm not the pious brand but I just tried to prayM
And then I looked to Julie Claire and sore abashed was IU
For from the robes that covered her I heard a baby cryU
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Thus was Love conqueror of death and life for life was givenB2
And though no saint on earth d'ye think Bill's squared hisself with HeavenB2

Robert Service



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