The Lay Of St. Odille Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABAAAACC DDDDDDDDCC EEFEGGEC HIHHHHIHJK CC BAAAALAAC FFFFMMMMMNN CC JJJ JMJJJJJJCC OOOOOPPPCC QQQQDDDQQRQ QCC SSSSSSCC CC TTCTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TC UUUUUUUUTTTCC TTTTTTTTUVQTTTSSSCC TTTTTTT| Odille was a maid of a dignified race | A |
| Her father Count Otto was lord of Alsace | B |
| Such an air such a grace | A |
| Such a form such a face | A |
| All agreed 'twere a fruitless endeavour to trace | A |
| In the Court or within fifty miles of the place | A |
| Many ladies in Strasburg were beautiful still | C |
| They were beat all to sticks by the lovely Odille | C |
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| But Odille was devout and before she was nine | D |
| Had 'experienced a call' she consider'd divine | D |
| To put on the veil at St Ermengarde's shrine | D |
| Lords Dukes and Electors and Counts Palatine | D |
| Came to seek her in marriage from both sides the Rhine | D |
| But vain their design | D |
| They are all left to pine | D |
| Their oglings and smiles are all useless in fine | D |
| Not one of these gentlefolks try as they will | C |
| Can draw 'Ask my papa' from the cruel Odille | C |
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| At length one of her suitors a certain Count Herman | E |
| A highly respectable man as a German | E |
| Who smoked like a chimney and drank like a merman | F |
| Paid his court to her father conceiving his firman | E |
| Would soon make her bend | G |
| And induce her to lend | G |
| An ear to a love tale in lieu of a sermon | E |
| He gained the old Count who said 'Come Mynheer fill | C |
| Here's luck to yourself and my daughter Odille ' | - |
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| The lady Odille was quite nervous with fear | H |
| When a little bird whisper'd that toast in her ear | I |
| She murmur'd 'Oh dear | H |
| My papa has got queer | H |
| I am sadly afraid with that nasty strong beer | H |
| He's so very austere and severe that it's clear | H |
| If he gets in his 'tantrums ' I can't remain here | I |
| But St Ermengarde's convent is luckily near | H |
| It were folly to stay | J |
| Pour prendre cong | K |
| I shall put on my bonnet and e'en run away ' | - |
| She unlock'd the back door and descended the hill | C |
| On whose crest stood the towers of the sire of Odille | C |
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| When he found she'd levanted the Count of Alsace | B |
| At first turn'd remarkably red in the face | A |
| He anathematized with much unction and grace | A |
| Every soul who came near and consign'd the whole race | A |
| Of runaway girls to a very warm place | A |
| With a frightful grimace | L |
| He gave orders for chase | A |
| His vassals set off at a deuce of a pace | A |
| And of all whom they met high or low Jack or Jill | C |
| Ask'd 'Pray have you seen anything of Odille ' | - |
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| Now I think I've been told for I'm no sporting man | F |
| That the 'knowing ones' call this by far the best plan | F |
| 'Take the lead and then keep it ' that is if you can | F |
| Odille thought so too so she set off and ran | F |
| Put her best leg before | M |
| Starting at score | M |
| As I said some lines since from that little back door | M |
| And not being missed until half after four | M |
| Had what hunters call 'law' for a good hour and more | M |
| Doing her best | N |
| Without stopping to rest | N |
| Like 'young Lochinvar who came out of the West ' | - |
| ''Tis done I am gone over briar brook and rill | C |
| They'll be sharp lads who catch me ' said young Miss Odille | C |
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| But you've all read in sop or Ph drus or Gay | J |
| How a tortoise and hare ran together one day | J |
| How the hare 'making play | J |
| Progress'd right slick away ' | - |
| As 'them tarnation chaps' the Americans say | J |
| While the tortoise whose figure is rather outr | M |
| For racing crawled straight on without let or stay | J |
| Having no post horse duty or turnpikes to pay | J |
| Till ere noon's ruddy ray | J |
| Changed to eve's sober grey | J |
| Though her form and obesity caused some delay | J |
| Perseverance and patience brought up her lee way | J |
| And she chased her fleet footed 'praycursor ' until | C |
| She o'ertook her at last so it fared with Odille | C |
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| For although as I said she ran gaily at first | O |
| And show'd no inclination to pause if she durst | O |
| She at length felt opprest with the heat and with thirst | O |
| Its usual attendant nor was that the worst | O |
| Her shoes went down at heel at last one of them burst | O |
| Now a gentleman smiles | P |
| At a trot of ten miles | P |
| But not so the Fair then consider the stiles | P |
| And as then ladies seldom wore things with a frill | C |
| Round the ancle these stiles sadly bother'd Odille | C |
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| Still despite all the obstacles placed in her track | Q |
| She kept steadily on though the terrible crack | Q |
| In her shoe made of course her progression more slack | Q |
| Till she reached the Swartz Forest in English The Black | Q |
| I cannot divine | D |
| How the boundary line | D |
| Was passed which is somewhere there formed by the Rhine | D |
| Perhaps she'd the knack | Q |
| To float o'er on her back | Q |
| Or perhaps crossed the old bridge of boats at Brisach | R |
| Which Vauban some years after secured from attack | Q |
| By a bastion of stone which the Germans call 'Wacke ' | - |
| All I know is she took not so much as a snack | Q |
| Till hungry and worn feeling wretchedly ill | C |
| On a mountain's brow sank down the weary Odille | C |
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| I said on its 'brow ' but I should have said 'crown ' | - |
| For 'twas quite on the summit bleak barren and brown | S |
| And so high that 'twas frightful indeed to look down | S |
| Upon Friburg a place of some little renown | S |
| That lay at its foot but imagine the frown | S |
| That contracted her brow when full many a clown | S |
| She perceived coming up from that horrid post town | S |
| They had followed her trail | C |
| And now thought without fail | C |
| As little boys say to 'lay salt on her tail ' | - |
| While the Count who knew no other law but his will | C |
| Swore that Herman that evening should marry Odille | C |
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| Alas for Odille poor dear what could she do | T |
| Her father's retainers now had her in view | T |
| As she found from their raising a joyous halloo | C |
| While the Count riding on at the head of his crew | T |
| In their snuff coloured doublets and breeches of blue | T |
| Was huzzaing and urging them on to pursue | T |
| What indeed could she do | T |
| She very well knew | T |
| If they caught her how much she should have to go through | T |
| But then she'd so shocking a hole in her shoe | T |
| And to go further on was impossible true | T |
| She might jump o'er the precipice still there are few | T |
| In her place who could manage their courage to screw | T |
| Up to bidding the world such a sudden adieu | T |
| Alack how she envied the birds as they flew | T |
| No Nassau balloon with its wicker canoe | T |
| Came to bear her from him she loathed worse than a Jew | T |
| So she fell on her knees in a terrible stew | T |
| Crying 'Holy St Ermengarde | T |
| Oh from these vermin guard | T |
| Her whose last hope rests entirely on you | T |
| Don't let papa catch me dear Saint rather kill | C |
| At once sur le champ your devoted Odille ' | - |
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| Its delightful to see those who strive to oppress | U |
| Get baulk'd when they think themselves sure of success | U |
| The Saint came to the rescue I fairly confess | U |
| I don't see as a Saint how she well could do less | U |
| Than to get such a votary out of her mess | U |
| Odille had scarce closed her pathetic address | U |
| When the rock gaping wide as the Thames at Sheerness | U |
| Closed again and secured her within its recess | U |
| In a natural grotto | T |
| Which puzzled Count Otto | T |
| Who could not conceive where the deuce she had got to | T |
| 'Twas her voice but 'twas Vox et pr terea Nil | C |
| Nor could any one guess what was gone with Odille | C |
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| Then burst from the mountain a splendour that quite | T |
| Eclipsed in its brilliance the finest Bude light | T |
| And there stood St Ermengarde drest all in white | T |
| A palm branch in her left hand her beads in her right | T |
| While with faces fresh gilt and with wings burnish'd bright | T |
| A great many little boys' heads took their flight | T |
| Above and around to a very great height | T |
| And seem'd pretty lively considering their plight | T |
| Since every one saw | U |
| With amazement and awe | V |
| They could never sit down for they hadn't de quoi | Q |
| All at the sight | T |
| From the knave to the knight | T |
| Felt a very unpleasant sensation called fright | T |
| While the Saint looking down | S |
| With a terrible frown | S |
| Said 'My Lords you are done most remarkably brown | S |
| I am really ashamed of you both my nerves thrill | C |
| At your scandalous conduct to poor dear Odille | C |
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| Come make yourselves scarce it is useless to stay | T |
| You will gain nothing here by a longer delay | T |
| 'Quick Presto Begone ' as the conjurors say | T |
| For as to the lady I've stow'd her away | T |
| In this hill in a stratum of London blue clay | T |
| And I shan't I assure you restore her to day | T |
| Till you faithfully pro | T |
Richard Harris Barham
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