The Lay Of St. Odille Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

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Odille was a maid of a dignified raceA
Her father Count Otto was lord of AlsaceB
Such an air such a graceA
Such a form such a faceA
All agreed 'twere a fruitless endeavour to traceA
In the Court or within fifty miles of the placeA
Many ladies in Strasburg were beautiful stillC
They were beat all to sticks by the lovely OdilleC
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But Odille was devout and before she was nineD
Had 'experienced a call' she consider'd divineD
To put on the veil at St Ermengarde's shrineD
Lords Dukes and Electors and Counts PalatineD
Came to seek her in marriage from both sides the RhineD
But vain their designD
They are all left to pineD
Their oglings and smiles are all useless in fineD
Not one of these gentlefolks try as they willC
Can draw 'Ask my papa' from the cruel OdilleC
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At length one of her suitors a certain Count HermanE
A highly respectable man as a GermanE
Who smoked like a chimney and drank like a mermanF
Paid his court to her father conceiving his firmanE
Would soon make her bendG
And induce her to lendG
An ear to a love tale in lieu of a sermonE
He gained the old Count who said 'Come Mynheer fillC
Here's luck to yourself and my daughter Odille '-
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The lady Odille was quite nervous with fearH
When a little bird whisper'd that toast in her earI
She murmur'd 'Oh dearH
My papa has got queerH
I am sadly afraid with that nasty strong beerH
He's so very austere and severe that it's clearH
If he gets in his 'tantrums ' I can't remain hereI
But St Ermengarde's convent is luckily nearH
It were folly to stayJ
Pour prendre congK
I shall put on my bonnet and e'en run away '-
She unlock'd the back door and descended the hillC
On whose crest stood the towers of the sire of OdilleC
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When he found she'd levanted the Count of AlsaceB
At first turn'd remarkably red in the faceA
He anathematized with much unction and graceA
Every soul who came near and consign'd the whole raceA
Of runaway girls to a very warm placeA
With a frightful grimaceL
He gave orders for chaseA
His vassals set off at a deuce of a paceA
And of all whom they met high or low Jack or JillC
Ask'd 'Pray have you seen anything of Odille '-
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Now I think I've been told for I'm no sporting manF
That the 'knowing ones' call this by far the best planF
'Take the lead and then keep it ' that is if you canF
Odille thought so too so she set off and ranF
Put her best leg beforeM
Starting at scoreM
As I said some lines since from that little back doorM
And not being missed until half after fourM
Had what hunters call 'law' for a good hour and moreM
Doing her bestN
Without stopping to restN
Like 'young Lochinvar who came out of the West '-
''Tis done I am gone over briar brook and rillC
They'll be sharp lads who catch me ' said young Miss OdilleC
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But you've all read in sop or Ph drus or GayJ
How a tortoise and hare ran together one dayJ
How the hare 'making playJ
Progress'd right slick away '-
As 'them tarnation chaps' the Americans sayJ
While the tortoise whose figure is rather outrM
For racing crawled straight on without let or stayJ
Having no post horse duty or turnpikes to payJ
Till ere noon's ruddy rayJ
Changed to eve's sober greyJ
Though her form and obesity caused some delayJ
Perseverance and patience brought up her lee wayJ
And she chased her fleet footed 'praycursor ' untilC
She o'ertook her at last so it fared with OdilleC
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For although as I said she ran gaily at firstO
And show'd no inclination to pause if she durstO
She at length felt opprest with the heat and with thirstO
Its usual attendant nor was that the worstO
Her shoes went down at heel at last one of them burstO
Now a gentleman smilesP
At a trot of ten milesP
But not so the Fair then consider the stilesP
And as then ladies seldom wore things with a frillC
Round the ancle these stiles sadly bother'd OdilleC
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Still despite all the obstacles placed in her trackQ
She kept steadily on though the terrible crackQ
In her shoe made of course her progression more slackQ
Till she reached the Swartz Forest in English The BlackQ
I cannot divineD
How the boundary lineD
Was passed which is somewhere there formed by the RhineD
Perhaps she'd the knackQ
To float o'er on her backQ
Or perhaps crossed the old bridge of boats at BrisachR
Which Vauban some years after secured from attackQ
By a bastion of stone which the Germans call 'Wacke '-
All I know is she took not so much as a snackQ
Till hungry and worn feeling wretchedly illC
On a mountain's brow sank down the weary OdilleC
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I said on its 'brow ' but I should have said 'crown '-
For 'twas quite on the summit bleak barren and brownS
And so high that 'twas frightful indeed to look downS
Upon Friburg a place of some little renownS
That lay at its foot but imagine the frownS
That contracted her brow when full many a clownS
She perceived coming up from that horrid post townS
They had followed her trailC
And now thought without failC
As little boys say to 'lay salt on her tail '-
While the Count who knew no other law but his willC
Swore that Herman that evening should marry OdilleC
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Alas for Odille poor dear what could she doT
Her father's retainers now had her in viewT
As she found from their raising a joyous hallooC
While the Count riding on at the head of his crewT
In their snuff coloured doublets and breeches of blueT
Was huzzaing and urging them on to pursueT
What indeed could she doT
She very well knewT
If they caught her how much she should have to go throughT
But then she'd so shocking a hole in her shoeT
And to go further on was impossible trueT
She might jump o'er the precipice still there are fewT
In her place who could manage their courage to screwT
Up to bidding the world such a sudden adieuT
Alack how she envied the birds as they flewT
No Nassau balloon with its wicker canoeT
Came to bear her from him she loathed worse than a JewT
So she fell on her knees in a terrible stewT
Crying 'Holy St ErmengardeT
Oh from these vermin guardT
Her whose last hope rests entirely on youT
Don't let papa catch me dear Saint rather killC
At once sur le champ your devoted Odille '-
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Its delightful to see those who strive to oppressU
Get baulk'd when they think themselves sure of successU
The Saint came to the rescue I fairly confessU
I don't see as a Saint how she well could do lessU
Than to get such a votary out of her messU
Odille had scarce closed her pathetic addressU
When the rock gaping wide as the Thames at SheernessU
Closed again and secured her within its recessU
In a natural grottoT
Which puzzled Count OttoT
Who could not conceive where the deuce she had got toT
'Twas her voice but 'twas Vox et pr terea NilC
Nor could any one guess what was gone with OdilleC
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Then burst from the mountain a splendour that quiteT
Eclipsed in its brilliance the finest Bude lightT
And there stood St Ermengarde drest all in whiteT
A palm branch in her left hand her beads in her rightT
While with faces fresh gilt and with wings burnish'd brightT
A great many little boys' heads took their flightT
Above and around to a very great heightT
And seem'd pretty lively considering their plightT
Since every one sawU
With amazement and aweV
They could never sit down for they hadn't de quoiQ
All at the sightT
From the knave to the knightT
Felt a very unpleasant sensation called frightT
While the Saint looking downS
With a terrible frownS
Said 'My Lords you are done most remarkably brownS
I am really ashamed of you both my nerves thrillC
At your scandalous conduct to poor dear OdilleC
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Come make yourselves scarce it is useless to stayT
You will gain nothing here by a longer delayT
'Quick Presto Begone ' as the conjurors sayT
For as to the lady I've stow'd her awayT
In this hill in a stratum of London blue clayT
And I shan't I assure you restore her to dayT
Till you faithfully proT

Richard Harris Barham



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