The Lay Of St. Odille Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABAAAACC DDDDDDDDCC EEFEGGEC HIHHHHIHJK CC BAAAALAAC FFFFMMMMMNN CC JJJ JMJJJJJJCC OOOOOPPPCC QQQQDDDQQRQ QCC SSSSSSCC CC TTCTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT TC UUUUUUUUTTTCC TTTTTTTTUVQTTTSSSCC TTTTTTTOdille was a maid of a dignified race | A |
Her father Count Otto was lord of Alsace | B |
Such an air such a grace | A |
Such a form such a face | A |
All agreed 'twere a fruitless endeavour to trace | A |
In the Court or within fifty miles of the place | A |
Many ladies in Strasburg were beautiful still | C |
They were beat all to sticks by the lovely Odille | C |
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But Odille was devout and before she was nine | D |
Had 'experienced a call' she consider'd divine | D |
To put on the veil at St Ermengarde's shrine | D |
Lords Dukes and Electors and Counts Palatine | D |
Came to seek her in marriage from both sides the Rhine | D |
But vain their design | D |
They are all left to pine | D |
Their oglings and smiles are all useless in fine | D |
Not one of these gentlefolks try as they will | C |
Can draw 'Ask my papa' from the cruel Odille | C |
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At length one of her suitors a certain Count Herman | E |
A highly respectable man as a German | E |
Who smoked like a chimney and drank like a merman | F |
Paid his court to her father conceiving his firman | E |
Would soon make her bend | G |
And induce her to lend | G |
An ear to a love tale in lieu of a sermon | E |
He gained the old Count who said 'Come Mynheer fill | C |
Here's luck to yourself and my daughter Odille ' | - |
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The lady Odille was quite nervous with fear | H |
When a little bird whisper'd that toast in her ear | I |
She murmur'd 'Oh dear | H |
My papa has got queer | H |
I am sadly afraid with that nasty strong beer | H |
He's so very austere and severe that it's clear | H |
If he gets in his 'tantrums ' I can't remain here | I |
But St Ermengarde's convent is luckily near | H |
It were folly to stay | J |
Pour prendre cong | K |
I shall put on my bonnet and e'en run away ' | - |
She unlock'd the back door and descended the hill | C |
On whose crest stood the towers of the sire of Odille | C |
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When he found she'd levanted the Count of Alsace | B |
At first turn'd remarkably red in the face | A |
He anathematized with much unction and grace | A |
Every soul who came near and consign'd the whole race | A |
Of runaway girls to a very warm place | A |
With a frightful grimace | L |
He gave orders for chase | A |
His vassals set off at a deuce of a pace | A |
And of all whom they met high or low Jack or Jill | C |
Ask'd 'Pray have you seen anything of Odille ' | - |
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Now I think I've been told for I'm no sporting man | F |
That the 'knowing ones' call this by far the best plan | F |
'Take the lead and then keep it ' that is if you can | F |
Odille thought so too so she set off and ran | F |
Put her best leg before | M |
Starting at score | M |
As I said some lines since from that little back door | M |
And not being missed until half after four | M |
Had what hunters call 'law' for a good hour and more | M |
Doing her best | N |
Without stopping to rest | N |
Like 'young Lochinvar who came out of the West ' | - |
''Tis done I am gone over briar brook and rill | C |
They'll be sharp lads who catch me ' said young Miss Odille | C |
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But you've all read in sop or Ph drus or Gay | J |
How a tortoise and hare ran together one day | J |
How the hare 'making play | J |
Progress'd right slick away ' | - |
As 'them tarnation chaps' the Americans say | J |
While the tortoise whose figure is rather outr | M |
For racing crawled straight on without let or stay | J |
Having no post horse duty or turnpikes to pay | J |
Till ere noon's ruddy ray | J |
Changed to eve's sober grey | J |
Though her form and obesity caused some delay | J |
Perseverance and patience brought up her lee way | J |
And she chased her fleet footed 'praycursor ' until | C |
She o'ertook her at last so it fared with Odille | C |
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For although as I said she ran gaily at first | O |
And show'd no inclination to pause if she durst | O |
She at length felt opprest with the heat and with thirst | O |
Its usual attendant nor was that the worst | O |
Her shoes went down at heel at last one of them burst | O |
Now a gentleman smiles | P |
At a trot of ten miles | P |
But not so the Fair then consider the stiles | P |
And as then ladies seldom wore things with a frill | C |
Round the ancle these stiles sadly bother'd Odille | C |
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Still despite all the obstacles placed in her track | Q |
She kept steadily on though the terrible crack | Q |
In her shoe made of course her progression more slack | Q |
Till she reached the Swartz Forest in English The Black | Q |
I cannot divine | D |
How the boundary line | D |
Was passed which is somewhere there formed by the Rhine | D |
Perhaps she'd the knack | Q |
To float o'er on her back | Q |
Or perhaps crossed the old bridge of boats at Brisach | R |
Which Vauban some years after secured from attack | Q |
By a bastion of stone which the Germans call 'Wacke ' | - |
All I know is she took not so much as a snack | Q |
Till hungry and worn feeling wretchedly ill | C |
On a mountain's brow sank down the weary Odille | C |
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I said on its 'brow ' but I should have said 'crown ' | - |
For 'twas quite on the summit bleak barren and brown | S |
And so high that 'twas frightful indeed to look down | S |
Upon Friburg a place of some little renown | S |
That lay at its foot but imagine the frown | S |
That contracted her brow when full many a clown | S |
She perceived coming up from that horrid post town | S |
They had followed her trail | C |
And now thought without fail | C |
As little boys say to 'lay salt on her tail ' | - |
While the Count who knew no other law but his will | C |
Swore that Herman that evening should marry Odille | C |
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Alas for Odille poor dear what could she do | T |
Her father's retainers now had her in view | T |
As she found from their raising a joyous halloo | C |
While the Count riding on at the head of his crew | T |
In their snuff coloured doublets and breeches of blue | T |
Was huzzaing and urging them on to pursue | T |
What indeed could she do | T |
She very well knew | T |
If they caught her how much she should have to go through | T |
But then she'd so shocking a hole in her shoe | T |
And to go further on was impossible true | T |
She might jump o'er the precipice still there are few | T |
In her place who could manage their courage to screw | T |
Up to bidding the world such a sudden adieu | T |
Alack how she envied the birds as they flew | T |
No Nassau balloon with its wicker canoe | T |
Came to bear her from him she loathed worse than a Jew | T |
So she fell on her knees in a terrible stew | T |
Crying 'Holy St Ermengarde | T |
Oh from these vermin guard | T |
Her whose last hope rests entirely on you | T |
Don't let papa catch me dear Saint rather kill | C |
At once sur le champ your devoted Odille ' | - |
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Its delightful to see those who strive to oppress | U |
Get baulk'd when they think themselves sure of success | U |
The Saint came to the rescue I fairly confess | U |
I don't see as a Saint how she well could do less | U |
Than to get such a votary out of her mess | U |
Odille had scarce closed her pathetic address | U |
When the rock gaping wide as the Thames at Sheerness | U |
Closed again and secured her within its recess | U |
In a natural grotto | T |
Which puzzled Count Otto | T |
Who could not conceive where the deuce she had got to | T |
'Twas her voice but 'twas Vox et pr terea Nil | C |
Nor could any one guess what was gone with Odille | C |
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Then burst from the mountain a splendour that quite | T |
Eclipsed in its brilliance the finest Bude light | T |
And there stood St Ermengarde drest all in white | T |
A palm branch in her left hand her beads in her right | T |
While with faces fresh gilt and with wings burnish'd bright | T |
A great many little boys' heads took their flight | T |
Above and around to a very great height | T |
And seem'd pretty lively considering their plight | T |
Since every one saw | U |
With amazement and awe | V |
They could never sit down for they hadn't de quoi | Q |
All at the sight | T |
From the knave to the knight | T |
Felt a very unpleasant sensation called fright | T |
While the Saint looking down | S |
With a terrible frown | S |
Said 'My Lords you are done most remarkably brown | S |
I am really ashamed of you both my nerves thrill | C |
At your scandalous conduct to poor dear Odille | C |
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Come make yourselves scarce it is useless to stay | T |
You will gain nothing here by a longer delay | T |
'Quick Presto Begone ' as the conjurors say | T |
For as to the lady I've stow'd her away | T |
In this hill in a stratum of London blue clay | T |
And I shan't I assure you restore her to day | T |
Till you faithfully pro | T |
Richard Harris Barham
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