Break-up Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABBBC DEEEE FFFFF GHHHI JJJJKK

Oh All the world's stillA
Seems no success of pedestalB
Heart docileB
All talk futileB
Seems I'm in exileC
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When boosm not speakD
Tender heart acheE
The beautiful world all fakeE
Mind restless and wine I takeE
Pale uninterested whenever I partakeE
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Hunger has no WhereaboutF
Sense has lostF
Everthing has stoppedF
When I see your love for me inconsistentF
All help seems irresilientF
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All the world has turned upside downG
When I think about you prevails suffocationH
Seems no control over my emotionH
All my words once lovable now are indignationH
When she looks down uponI
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Beloved leaves me halfwayJ
She is yet always in my prayJ
Waiting for all the time Hi she will sayJ
Trouble has toiled in my mind tell her don't delayJ
But unaware I she had said bye byeK
But unaware I she had said bye byeK

Rayaba Saindane
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/24/2022

Poet's note: This poem describes the lover's breakup with his beloved. The poem is about pain and restlessness .




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