Lover's Gifts Lxx: Take Back Your Coins Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHIBBCDJKELMNO FPQHRESFTHIUVWAXYKZA

Take back your coins King's Councillor I am of those women youA
sent to the forest shrine to decoy the young ascetic who had neverB
seen a women I failed in your biddingC
Dimly day was breaking when the hermit boy came to bathe inD
the stream his tawny locks crowded on his shoulders like aE
cluster of morning clouds and his limbs shining like a streak ofF
sunbeam We laughed and sang as we rowed in our boat we jumpedG
into the river in a mad frolic and danced around him when the sunH
rose staring at us from the water's edge in a flush of divineI
angerB
Like a child god the boy opened his eyes and watched ourB
movements the wonder deepening till his eyes shone like morningC
stars He lifted his clasped hands and chanted a hymn of praise inD
his bird like young voice thrilling every leaf of the forestJ
Never such words were sung to a mortal woman before they were likeK
the silent hymn to the dawn which rises from the hushed hills THeE
women hid their mouths with their hands their bodies swaying withL
laughter and a spasm of doubt ran across his face Quickly cameM
I to his side sorely pained and bowing to his feet I saidN
Lord accept my serviceO
I led him to the grassy bank wiped his body with the end ofF
my silken mantle and kneeling on the ground I dried his feetP
with my trailing hair When I raised my face and looked into hisQ
eyes I thought I felt the world's first kiss to the first womanH
Blessed am I blessed is God who made me a woman I heard him sayR
to me What God unknown are you YOur touch is the touch of theE
Immortal your eyes have the mystery of the midnightS
Ah no not that smile King's Councillor the dust ofF
worldly wisdom has covered your sight old man But this boy'sT
innocence pierced the mist and saw the shining truth the womanH
divineI
The women clapped their hands and laughed their obsceneU
laugh and with veils dragged on the dust and hair hanging looseV
they began to pelt him with flowersW
Alas my spotless sun could not my shame weave fiery mist toA
cover you in its folds I fell at his feet and cried Forgive meX
I fled like a stricken deer through shade and sun and cried asY
I fled Forgive me The women's foul laughter pressed me likeK
a cracking fire but the words ever rang in my ears What GodZ
unknown are youA

Rabindranath Tagore



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