Broken Song Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHIJKLMD NOPQRSTUVW XRWMW WWWYMZD A2B2 WWDDC WDFI WC2D2YD2E2DZEF2YWWG2 H2I2 DWWWJ2WWK2WKasinath the new young singer fills the hall with sound | A |
The seven notes dance in his throat like seven tame birds | B |
His voice is a sharp sword slicing and thrusting everywhere | C |
It darts like lightening no knowing where it will go when | D |
He sets deadly traps for himself then cuts them away | E |
The courtiers listen in amazement give frequent gasps of praise | F |
Only the old king Pratap Ray sits like wood unmoved | G |
Haraj Lal is the only singer he likes all others leave him cold | H |
From childhood he has spent so long listening to him sing | I |
Rag Kafi during holi cloud songs during the rains | J |
Songs for Durga at dawn in autumn songs to bid her farewell | K |
His heart swelled when he heard them and his eyes swam with tears | L |
And on days when friends gathered and filled the hall | M |
There were cowherds' songs of Krsna in raags Bhupali and Multan | D |
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So many nights of wedding festivity have passed in that royal house | N |
Servants dressed in red hundreds of lamps alight | O |
The bridegroom sitting shyly in his finery and jewels | P |
Young friends teasing him and whispering in his ear | Q |
Before him singing raag Sahana sits Baraj Lal | R |
The king's heart is full of all those days and songs | S |
When he hears some other singer he feels no chord inside | T |
No sudden magical awakening of memories of the past | U |
When Pratap Ray watches Kasinath he just sees his wagging head | V |
Tune after tune after tune bu none with any echo in the heart | W |
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Kasinath asks for a rest and the singing stops for a space | X |
Pratap Ray smilingly turns his eyes to Baraj Lal | R |
He puts his mouth to his ear and says 'Dear ustad | W |
Give us a song as songs ought to be this is no song at all | M |
It's all tricks and games like a cat hunting a bird | W |
We used to hear songs in the old days today they have no idea ' | - |
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Old Baraj Lal white haired white turban on his head | W |
Bows to the assembled courtiers and slowly takes his seat | W |
He takes the tanpura in his wasted heavily veined hand | W |
And with lowered head and closed eyes begins raag Yaman kalyap | Y |
His quavering voice is swallowed by the enormous hall | M |
Is like a tiny bird in a storm unable to fly for all it tries | Z |
Pratap Ray sitting to the left encourages him again and again | D |
'Superb bravo ' he says in his ear 'sing out loud ' | - |
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The courtiers are inattentive some whisper amongst themselves | A2 |
Some of them yawn some doze some go off to their rooms | B2 |
Some of them call to servants 'Bring the bookah bring some pan ' | - |
Some fan themselves furiously and complain of the heat | W |
They cannot keep still for a minute they shuffle or walk about | W |
The hall was quiet before but every sort of noise has grown | D |
The old man's singing is swamped like a frail boat in a typhoon | D |
Only his shaky fingering of the tanpura shows it is there | C |
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Music that should rise on its own joy from the depths of the heart | W |
Is crushed by heedless clamour like a fountain under a stone | D |
The song and Baraj Lal's feelings go separate ways | F |
But he sings for all he is worth to keep up the honour of his king | I |
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One of the verses of the song has somehow slipped from his mind | W |
He quickly goes back tries to get it right this time | C2 |
Again he forgets it is lost he shakes his head at the shame | D2 |
He starts the song at the beginning again he has to stop | Y |
His hand trembles doubly as he prays to his teachers name | D2 |
His voice quakes with distress like a lamp guttering in a breeze | E2 |
He abandons the words of the song and tries to salvage the tune | D |
But suddenly his wide mouthed singing breaks into loud cries | Z |
The intricate melody goes to the winds the rhythm is swept away | E |
Tears snap the thread of the song cascade like pearls | F2 |
In shame he rests his head on the old tanpura in his lap | Y |
He has failed to remember a song he weeps as he did as a child | W |
With brimming eyes king Pratap Ray tenderly touches his friend | W |
'Come let us go from here ' he says with kindness and love | G2 |
They leave that festive hall with its hundreds of blinding lights | H2 |
The two old friends go outside holding each other's hands | I2 |
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Baraj says with hands clasped 'Master our days are gone | D |
New men have come now new styles and customs in the world | W |
The court we kept is deserted only the two of us are left | W |
Don't ask anyone to listen to me now I beg you at your feet my lord | W |
The singer along does not make a song there has to be someone who hears | J2 |
One man opens his throat to sing the other sings in his mind | W |
Only when waves fall on the shore do they make a harmonious sound | W |
Only when breezes shake the woods do we hear a rustling in the leaves | K2 |
Only from a marriage of two forces does music arise in the world | W |
Where there is no love where listeners are dumb there never can be song ' | - |
Rabindranath Tagore
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