Waiting Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFFGF F HIJKL AMJ| She has been waiting for me | A |
| alone in a niche | B |
| in a garden of remembrance | C |
| on the Magaliesberg Mountains | D |
| When it's time | E |
| I will go to her | F |
| Interned together | F |
| amongst ornaments of oblivion | G |
| primeval elements entangled forever | F |
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| Remember | F |
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| I remember a flickering candle | H |
| sedatives of light and darkness | I |
| a memory from childhood | J |
| Light was soft and comforting | K |
| and sleep just a gentle puff away | L |
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| In a far off galaxy | A |
| a supernova fuses | M |
| into a dark singularity | J |
Pieter Odendaal
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 09/15/2020
Poet's note: My late wife.
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