Paradise Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDBEF GH IJKL MK NOPONQONO

I'mm the potA
Once upon a time I was found in the kitchen of every familyB
Whether rich or poorC
The kitchen was usually accessible to everyone including visitors and neighborsD
I usually had a cup placed on top of meB
Anyone who was thirsty simply scooped water drank and placed the cup backE
Come to think of thisF
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Was the cup washed before or after drinkingG
For where It was only washed in the morning and never again until the next dayH
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The Indomie generation will not believe this That was possible because there was no Nollywood that gave people the impression that Society especially the villages were occupied by evil men and women looking for whom to poisonI
It was a time when churchgoers were not told from the pulpitsJ
That their predicaments were caused by their family members neighbors and friendsK
I am talking of a time when it was unheard of for chalatants to brag about possessing the powers to make one rich overnightL
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The time I am talking about was a time once upon a timeM
When uncles were known to be the best friendsK
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During the holidays children were moving from one uncle and aunt to anotherN
It was always joyful to see an uncle or an auntO
Today there is hardly any die by fire prayer without mentioning wicked unclesP
Every misfortune now is tied to either an uncle or an auntO
I am talking of a time when children played togetherN
When it was difficult even impossible to identify the children from wealthy or poor homesQ
When it was extremely difficult a task to identify the orphaned and the parentedO
I'm talking of a time when the extended family superceded the nuclearN
Unfortunately we traded our paradise for a parasiteO

Peter Nchumba Biligrini
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 01/19/2025

Poet's note: The poem is written in the year 2024. It portrays how we once lived happily as a people but today, allowed irrelevant things tear us apart.




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