Offerings (a Movement In Four Parts) Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE FGHI JKLM NOO PDQR STUQ NVVW LESVV EVDXY BEOZ VA2 B2EVVV C2MD2E2D2 VVJF2 VV JE2E JD2E2JG2 MVD2 JVV D2D2 VH2

The night is folly without the moonA
trees blank space against a frontal skyB
where lattice work from a bled fish revealsC
skeletal markings will not administerD
the red jack of hearts to a mistress seaE
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Most fickle the ways of a cockroachF
I don't recommend them to offeringsG
of white linen cold squares atopH
a stone diamonded floorI
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Palaver shacks drone in ghostly lightJ
communicating some message about eel runsK
up the black river the equivalent brushL
of tombstones against dark nightsoilM
-
Tiny bars open as cubiclesN
proverbial flashes of the coming eveningO
haciendas to count every blessingO
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The road to such placesP
snarls a dusty pleasureD
and will heat thin bloodQ
to boil in the daylight hoursR
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II-
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Sweat corrodes the cork's emplacementS
about green bottlenecksT
its azure breath tossing backU
pools of sparse liquidQ
-
I picture ships placed within such bottlesN
as bannisters along corrugated highwaysV
seawater rusting from within the steamfitters'sV
tonsorial edgeW
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Haze thickens as sails blur to an artist's brushL
then squiggles in the oilpaint of memoryE
her sides fashioning red wounds as pigmentS
surfacing from robotical crustaceansV
lancing the bottom of a deeper creviceV
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III-
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My steps clank to the gaoler's keyE
to become within handmaidens to thorned plantsV
acting as fuselage along the building's exteriorD
Afar a white seagull sits as a bespectacled touristX
gracing a buoy like a madras shirtY
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Early stars in an afternoon skyB
are expansive in Chateau Lafitte fineryE
the Rothschilds of the universe playingO
a cosmic baccaratZ
-
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A girl in a brandy snifter of a dressV
dark sensual runs through tomes of my mindA2
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It's a hall of mirrors thereB2
the radiating glass of the seaE
twilight splendour in tall grassV
the hands of thick mahogany chairsV
grimacing against perspiring wallsV
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I sponge water like a good midshipmanC2
off the brow of a leaking vesselM
Nowhere are there signs of more thanD2
partial seepage though smoke in theE2
back corridors exists from the fiery aguandineD2
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IV-
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Green palms unfurl as flagsV
to the accordian of my eyesV
blinking back the strong belt of sunlightJ
that precisely floods the roomF2
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Sailors jostle this crowd of memoriesV
some surly lipped with broad tattoesV
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A naked mermaid presses her thighs 'gainstJ
memory door then winks as theE2
stellar crust of oblivion takes meE
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In sleep waterfront toughs are transformedJ
to storeowners that smile exchange pleasantries inD2
SabaE2
French gendarmes embrace on the other sideJ
clustering like starfish on the twin breasts of a beachG2
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I devour cups not of riverwater in this cellM
but the best pink champagne at the captain'sV
receptionD2
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With hatfuls of intermittent restJ
blurred outlines recede into mistsV
thin as General Winter's treasured April snowsV
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The bony M of a hatpinD2
the passkey to better redress of fortuneD2
the turnstills concealed within lavabeds of-
bladegrassV
beckon upon the return voyage homeH2

Paul Cameron Brown



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