I Like You Calm, As If You Were Absent Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEECFACBGGCABAAAH IABCDAACAACBGGCABAAA H

I like you calm as if you were absentA
and you hear me far off and my voice does not touch youB
It seems that your eyelids have taken to flyingC
it seems that a kiss has sealed up your mouthD
Since all these things are filled with my spiritE
you come from things filled with my spiritE
You appear as my soul as the butterfly s dreamingC
and you appear as Sadness s wordF
I like you calm as if you were distantA
you are a moaning a butterfly s cooingC
You hear me far off my voice does not reach youB
Let me be calmed then calmed by your silenceG
Let me commune then commune with your silenceG
clear as a light and pure as a ringC
You are like night calmed constellatedA
Your silence is star like as distant as trueB
I like you calm as if you were absentA
distant and saddened as if you were deadA
One word at that moment a smile is sufficientA
And I thrill then I thrill that it cannot be soH
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I like you calm as if you were absentA
and you hear me far off and my voice does not touch youB
It seems that your eyelids have taken to flyingC
it seems that a kiss has sealed up your mouthD
Since all these things are filled with my spiritA
you come from things filled with my spiritA
You appear as my soul as the butterfly s dreamingC
and you appear as Sadness s wordA
I like you calm as if you were distantA
you are a moaning a butterfly s cooingC
You hear me far off my voice does not reach youB
Let me be calmed then calmed by your silenceG
Let me commune then commune with your silenceG
clear as a light and pure as a ringC
You are like night calmed constellatedA
Your silence is star like as distant as trueB
I like you calm as if you were absentA
distant and saddened as if you were deadA
One word at that moment a smile is sufficientA
And I thrill then I thrill that it cannot be soH

Pablo Neruda



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