Omitted Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AAABCD EFGFF FAH IFFJ FKLFAJust like that of a free wind was she | A |
like a soaring kite was she | A |
I wonder where she could be | A |
We were led by the path we took | B |
while she carved a part of hers | C |
stumbling rising and care free she walked | D |
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We were fretted about the marrow | E |
in which she simply revealed in days | F |
just like that of a winter morn | G |
Living each movement like a sloths | F |
that are to the fullest summoning her into paradise | F |
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Her smile rings through us like a thousand bells | F |
I wonder where she would be | A |
She touch our hearts like a sweet angelic beams of love where she could vanished into the thin air | H |
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In scorching sun she was like a patch of shade | I |
in an endless desert like an oasis | F |
she would lay herself on our bruised hearts | F |
like soothing balm on top of a baguette | J |
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Fearless she would frolicked in our streams | F |
never hesitating to swim against the tide | K |
Wandered lonesome as a cloud | L |
Yet she was still in our hearts | F |
I wonder where she could be | A |
Oluwa Olaseni
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 03/15/2021
Poet's note: This poem is all about how much I missed my girlfriend,that she has travelled some years back.
I want to express my feelings of how much I have missed her.
The poem is like she's being omitted in my life.
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