Omitted Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AAABCD EFGFF FAH IFFJ FKLFA| Just like that of a free wind was she | A |
| like a soaring kite was she | A |
| I wonder where she could be | A |
| We were led by the path we took | B |
| while she carved a part of hers | C |
| stumbling rising and care free she walked | D |
| - | |
| We were fretted about the marrow | E |
| in which she simply revealed in days | F |
| just like that of a winter morn | G |
| Living each movement like a sloths | F |
| that are to the fullest summoning her into paradise | F |
| - | |
| Her smile rings through us like a thousand bells | F |
| I wonder where she would be | A |
| She touch our hearts like a sweet angelic beams of love where she could vanished into the thin air | H |
| - | |
| In scorching sun she was like a patch of shade | I |
| in an endless desert like an oasis | F |
| she would lay herself on our bruised hearts | F |
| like soothing balm on top of a baguette | J |
| - | |
| Fearless she would frolicked in our streams | F |
| never hesitating to swim against the tide | K |
| Wandered lonesome as a cloud | L |
| Yet she was still in our hearts | F |
| I wonder where she could be | A |
Oluwa Olaseni
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 03/15/2021
Poet's note: This poem is all about how much I missed my girlfriend,that she has travelled some years back.
I want to express my feelings of how much I have missed her.
The poem is like she's being omitted in my life.
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Omitted is a poem by Oluwa Olaseni. This page includes the poem text, poet information, related topics, comments, and similar poems.