The Potential Of The Subconscious Mind Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFGH IJKL MNHO MPLQ

I can't see it but I can hear itA
A voice of conviction in my headB
I can't touch it but I feel it's presenceC
I'm sure it truly existsD
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The mind is like a very fertile plainE
Any seed good or bad will thrive wellF
It all depends on the energy it receivesG
A negative mind will never give you a positive lifeH
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The mother of instinctsI
The birthplace of all emotions and sentimentsJ
A pace setter a goal getter self fulfillment is assuredK
Provided that I am steadfast in my decisionL
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I want to stop I can't see any possible successM
Even my friends say I will eventually get tired of tryingN
But the voice in my head tells me to go far in lifeH
So far that I can't hear those friends anymoreO
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I know the power of my mind and so I programmed it for successM
And if my vision gets blurry I'll adjust my focusP
I won't stop when I'm tired I'll stop when I'm doneL
The mind is everything what you think you becomeQ

Obagha Chiamaka
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 04/18/2021

Poet's note: My first ever poem, as far back as I can remember. I composed it for my presentation at my school's word battle. I didn't think it was so much of a big deal until I ended the poem presentation and the crowd went wild. For the first time in a while, I felt a sense of great accomplishment.




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