Her Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHIJKLIMNOPQRS TKKKK

Wednesday Netball PM but never on timeA
Winter it was the break of daylightB
The changing room was uncomfortable as usualC
softened by the laughter of inside jokesD
Always the first to laughE
always the last to leaveF
The heavy weight dragsG
A gap in the numbersH
no one noticesI
No oneJ
HerK
The world bends at her glanceL
She turns looks sees noticesI
She waitsM
for meN
Time follows waits slows to a haltO
SilenceP
Gentle ticking resonates with her stepsQ
tick tick tickR
Lines blur about her eyes im lost within themS
She callsT
i answerK
i answerK
To herK
For HerK

Nini Lutfat
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 12/05/2025

Poet's note: This poem is about a situation of being in a locker room, feeling like the odd one out, scared to look at people in the changing room trying to fit in. Wanting to fade into the background be like others. And someone notices you. She always notices you. The world slows it doesnt feel real. It feels like she has you on a leash holding you grounding you. You dont care, you wouldnt have it any other way.




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