"you All Stay Home And Stay Safe". Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABC D E F G HEI J KEJLH M C N| Stay Home This was what you ordered | A |
| This is what i wish to obey | B |
| I want to reach home but can you please tell me how to get there | C |
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| I thought that the tent at your construction site is my home i thought that the plastic moulded chair which you have me to sit as a security guard at your factories was my home i thought the servant quaters at the high rise buildings was my home | D |
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| But as i started coughing because of the cling and dust of your factories i became a suspect My hands which once used to do all your household chores are now dirty | E |
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| I have become untouchable Untouchable by the virus you brought post your foreign vacations | F |
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| Now we are the spreaders of this virus and are thrown out so that the places can be disinfected and sanitized | G |
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| Can you see an antline from your skyscraper | H |
| That's me and many like me | E |
| Hungry flushed dehydrated faces walking on the roads which were meant for you to speed up your cars | I |
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| We don't have faces We bear only the herd which you can find numbered in the newspapers | J |
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| Home is made by the people who live in it Now this is where our pilgrimage is | K |
| With gutka in my mouth i run fast faster then your sight of looking down upon me | E |
| I run faster when i see the next milestone reading next X hundred kilometres | J |
| I run faster with the child in my lap and my wife by my side carrying a baby in her cage | L |
| I run faster when i can give hope to my fellow men that we'll reach together | H |
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| I have walked far away miles so that you stay safe at your home and don't get infected | M |
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| All what i am carrying along with the fleshes is my identity card the card named as Adhaar so that the media can trace and send my body to my home if i couldn't reach there | C |
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| You all stay home and stay safe | N |
Nidhi Sharma
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