"leave A Piece Of You" Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AB C DED FGH IJJWhen I am with you i want to hold on to every moment | A |
and when you are apart each moment feels like forever | B |
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And then I repent as to why I didn't plead for those extra ten minutes | C |
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So it's just like when missing you becomes almost too bad | D |
and the distances seems almost too hard to bear | E |
logging for you just makes me go mad | D |
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When you say you ought to go | F |
I never know how will I make it through unless I have a piece of you to help me make through the next days | G |
and keep all the inherent blue feelings away | H |
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A room of you laughter smiles and our conversations too | I |
I keep them close and hold them tight | J |
as i find in you my sweetest love and brightest light | J |
Nidhi Sharma
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Rita Bhadwar: a piece of you to complete you. Great work.
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Rosy Gandhi: you are so choosy with the words
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Priya Seth: what an expression of the fear and pain
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