Letters From A Man In Solitary Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGBBBHDIJEKELMD NDOKDBPQRSTUVJBWXDYZ LA2 B2BC2D2EE2JEBH F2E2G2H2I2J2BWJBBBBB BK2L2M2 LN2WEO2P2Q2BKTQER2ZM 2BBM2S2PBLET2 BF2EQ2L2BU2V2L2EJJ LA | |
I carved your name on my watchband | B |
with my fingernail | C |
Where I am you know | D |
I don't have a pearl handled jackknife | E |
they won't give me anything sharp | F |
or a plane tree with its head in the clouds | G |
Trees may grow in the yard | B |
but I'm not allowed | B |
to see the sky overhead | B |
How many others are in this place | H |
I don't know | D |
I'm alone far from them | I |
they're all together far from me | J |
To talk anyone besides myself | E |
is forbidden | K |
So I talk to myself | E |
But I find my conversation so boring | L |
my dear wife that I sing songs | M |
And what do you know | D |
that awful always off key voice of mine | N |
touches me so | D |
that my heart breaks | O |
And just like the barefoot orphan | K |
lost in the snow | D |
in those old sad stories my heart | B |
with moist blue eyes | P |
and a little red runny rose | Q |
wants to snuggle up in your arms | R |
It doesn't make me blush | S |
that right now | T |
I'm this weak | U |
this selfish | V |
this human simply | J |
No doubt my state can be explained | B |
physiologically psychologically etc | W |
Or maybe it's | X |
this barred window | D |
this earthen jug | Y |
these four walls | Z |
which for months have kept me from hearing | L |
another human voice | A2 |
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It's five o'clock my dear | B2 |
Outside | B |
with its dryness | C2 |
eerie whispers | D2 |
mud roof | E |
and lame skinny horse | E2 |
standing motionless in infinity | J |
I mean it's enough to drive the man inside crazy with grief | E |
outside with all its machinery and all its art | B |
a plains night comes down red on treeless space | H |
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Again today night will fall in no time | F2 |
A light will circle the lame skinny horse | E2 |
And the treeless space in this hopeless landscape | G2 |
stretched out before me like the body of a hard man | H2 |
will suddenly be filled with stars | I2 |
We'll reach the inevitable end once more | J2 |
which is to say the stage is set | B |
again today for an elaborate nostalgia | W |
Me | J |
the man inside | B |
once more I'll exhibit my customary talent | B |
and singing an old fashioned lament | B |
in the reedy voice of my childhood | B |
once more by God it will crush my unhappy heart | B |
to hear you inside my head | B |
so far | K2 |
away as if I were watching you | L2 |
in a smoky broken mirror | M2 |
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It's spring outside my dear wife spring | L |
Outside on the plain suddenly the smell | N2 |
of fresh earth birds singing etc | W |
It's spring my dear wife | E |
the plain outside sparkles | O2 |
And inside the bed comes alive with bugs | P2 |
the water jug no longer freezes | Q2 |
and in the morning sun floods the concrete | B |
The sun | K |
every day till noon now | T |
it comes and goes | Q |
from me flashing off | E |
and on | R2 |
And as the day turns to afternoon shadows climb the walls | Z |
the glass of the barred window catches fire | M2 |
and it's night outside | B |
a cloudless spring night | B |
And inside this is spring's darkest hour | M2 |
In short the demon called freedom | S2 |
with its glittering scales and fiery eyes | P |
possesses the man inside | B |
especially in spring | L |
I know this from experience my dear wife | E |
from experience | T2 |
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Sunday today | B |
Today they took me out in the sun for the first time | F2 |
And I just stood there struck for the first time in my life | E |
by how far away the sky is | Q2 |
how blue | L2 |
and how wide | B |
Then I respectfully sat down on the earth | U2 |
I leaned back against the wall | V2 |
For a moment no trap to fall into | L2 |
no struggle no freedom no wife | E |
Only earth sun and me | J |
I am happy | J |
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Trans by Randy Blasing and Mutlu Konuk | L |
Nazim Hikmet
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