A Candle Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCB DEFE GHII JJKK LLMN

For those who are not hereA
let's light a candleB
a candle for our deepest fearsC
and all the obstacles we can't handleB
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Let's talk to the gods or GodD
In the form of prayer hymn or a songE
Let it be revealed to usF
Where we went wrongE
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Why is it that so many lives are lostG
When eternal life is what we seek the mostH
Why is there an angel of deathI
Waiting for somebody's last breathI
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Peace and harmony is what we needJ
A lovely quiet life indeedJ
but things never go our wayK
Today could be our last dayK
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Let's hope the gods or God will keep us aliveL
Despite the challenges we shall surviveL
Let's hope today marks the end of our mournM
Let's light a candle for those who are no moreN

Msimisi Mngomezulu
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 05/09/2021

Poet's note: We have buried enough people already, we now seek to live forever




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