If Only You Cared Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABCD EFGHD IJKLD CMNLD| If only you cared for my mind | A |
| You would never want to wind | A |
| And see what bad that has passed in me | B |
| For humanity has never blamed a heart | C |
| That wants to learn and let go of the past | D |
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| Like a rose that wants to be watered | E |
| Let my mind be at peace passing through | F |
| If the rains fail to come by and pay a visit | G |
| Water me with lots of love and passion | H |
| That wants to learn and let go of the past | D |
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| May the rainbow colours of love | I |
| Create new beginnings in a bleak future | J |
| And it's colours like the sun rays bring back | K |
| The once faded smile of sensing hope | L |
| That wants to learn and let go of the past | D |
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| If you only cared for my heart | C |
| Oh how this wonderful world would enrich | M |
| Our souls in perfect peaceful places | N |
| Giving birth to a new ray of hope | L |
| That wants to learn and let go of the past | D |
Millicent Okello
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 03/15/2021
Poet's note: If only you cared is a poem about humanity. Caring for one another in times of need, good and bad. The poem was written at a time when things seem so hopeless and people want those who care for them to love them bringing hope. The poem has brought a Ray of sunshine into my life even after all that I have been through.
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