October Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDEFGHIJKLMNOPK QRQSTUVHWKXY TGZA2UUTTB2C2D2E2UF2 A2G2H2I2J2G2KK2L2M2N 2O2 P2Q2R2HR2S2FB2T2U2V2 UW2GTA2QTX2Y2 OZ2B2UA3B3C3ND3E3TZ2 F3 G3H3TG3I3KJ3K3DQ2L3J 2M3C3N3YO3P3Q3TKHO3H CTTBTKR3M3TR2Q2TH HTTTTS3T3U3TG2V3U3BT W3HBX3TTY3TZ3

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A smudge for the horizonB
that on a clear day showsC
the hard edge of hills andD
buildings on the other coastE
Anchored boats all head one wayF
north where the wind comes fromG
You can see the storm inflatingH
out of the west A dark holeI
in gray cloud twirls widensJ
while white rips multiplyK
on the water far outL
Wet tousled yellow leavesM
thick on the slate terraceN
The jay s hoarse cry He sO
stumbling in the airP
too soaked to flyK
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Knuckles of the rainQ
on the roofR
chuckles into the drainQ
pipe spatters onS
the leaves that litterT
the grass MelancholyU
morning the tide fullV
in the bay an overflowingH
bowl At least no windW
no roughness in the skyK
its gray face bedraggledX
by its tearsY
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Peeling a pear I rememberT
my daddy s hand His thumbG
the one that got nipped by the sawZ
lacked a nail fit intoA2
the cored hollow of the slipperyU
half his knife skinned so neatlyU
Dad would pare the fruit from ourT
orchard in the fall while MotherT
boiled the jars prepared forB2
putting up Dad used to darnC2
our socks when we were smallD2
and cut our hair and toenailsE2
Sunday mornings in pajamas we dU
take turns in his lap He d helpF2
bathe us sometimes Dad could doA2
anything He built our dining tableG2
chairs the buffet the bay windowH2
seat my little desk of cherry woodI2
where I wrote my first poems ThatJ2
day at the shop splitting panelG2
boards on the electric saw oh IK
can hear the screech of it nowK2
the whirling blade that slicedL2
my daddy s thum he received the marM2
that long after in his coffinN2
distinguished his skilled handO2
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I sit with braided fingersP2
and closed eyesQ2
in a span of late sunlightR2
The spokes are closingH
It is fall warm milk of lightR2
though from an aging breastS2
I do not mean to prayF
The posture for thanks orB2
supplication is the sameT2
as for weariness or reliefU2
But I am glad for the luckV2
of light Surely it is godlyU
that it makes all thingsW2
begin and appear and becomeG
actual to each otherT
Light that s sucked intoA2
the eye warming the brainQ
with wires of colorT
Light that hatched lifeX2
out of the cold egg of earthY2
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Dark wild honey the lion sO
eye color you brought homeZ2
from a country storeB2
Tastes of the work of shaggyU
bees on strong weedsA3
their midsummer bloomB3
My brain s electric circuitC3
glows like the lion s irisN
that concentrated vibratesD3
while seeming not to moveE3
Thick transparent amberT
you brought homeZ2
the sweet that burnsF3
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The very hairs of your headG3
are numbered said the wordsH3
in my head as the haircutterT
snipped and cut my round headG3
a newel poked out of the tentI3
top s slippery sheet while myK
hairs straight rays rainedJ3
down making pattern on the neatK3
vacant cosmos of my lap AndD
maybe it was those tiny fliesQ2
phantoms of my aging eyes seenL3
out of the sides floating thatJ2
when you turn to find themM3
full face always dissolve butC3
I saw I think minusculeN3
marked in clearest ink HairsY
and fall the cut offO3
ends streaking little cometsP3
till they tumbled to confuseQ3
with all the others in theirT
fizzled heaps in canyons of myK
lap And what keeps askingH
in my head now that brushed offO3
and finished I m walkingH
in the street is how can thoseC
numbers remain all the way throughT
and all along the length of everyT
hair and even before each oneB
is grown apparently throughT
my scalp For if the hairs of myK
head are numbered it meansR3
no more and no less of themM3
have ever or will ever beT
In my head now cool and lightR2
thoughts phantom white fliesQ2
take a fling This discoveryT
can apply to everythingH
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Now and then a red leaf ridingH
the slow flow of gray waterT
From the bridge see far intoT
the woods now that limbs are bareT
ground thick littered SeeT
along the scarcely gliding streamS3
the blanched diminished raggedT3
swamp and woods the sun stillU3
spills into Stand still stareT
hard into bramble and tangleG2
past leaning broken trunksV3
sprawled roots exposed WillU3
something move some visionB
come to outline Yes thereT
deep in a dark bird hangsW3
in the thicket stretches a wingH
Reversing his perch he says oneB
Chuck His shoulder patchX3
that should be red looks grayT
This old redwing has decided toT
stay this year not join theY3
strenuous migration Better hereT
in the familiar to fadeZ3

May Swenson



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