Struggle Of Immortality Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABB CDEFGHIJ BEDJJLooking out of the window it was breezy | A |
and windy | A |
As I guess at the skies and nature | B |
And I was lost in my own imagination of man and nature | B |
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Man's life is so unstable Like the wind he lost control of himself when loose his mind | C |
Like the wind he watches his life pass away in his own very awareness | D |
Like an emptyness he wonders far and near explore fight and archive greatly but forgotten when he's gone | E |
Like reality after a milenium he becomes the dust when he sleeps in death | F |
Like an infant he becomes weak and powerless when he is down in health | G |
Like a fool he watches his will taken away when he is poor | H |
Like a dog he watches himself decieved and chain to a particular believe and oppress by a fellow man when he's ignorant | I |
Like a goat led to the slaughter he watches the grave stares at him knowing one day he shall be confined into it without his approval | J |
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But the endless will given to man is the only strength used by the wise to conquer | B |
And those who conquer their names shall be wretting in the streets and the walls of the living when they are gone | E |
There are called the immotals | D |
I am the immotal | J |
You are the immotal | J |
Martins Oko
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 07/08/2020
Poet's note: This very peom is dedicated to myself in this struggle and hustle for success
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