The Circle Game Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABC DCEFEG HIJK LMNLOP QRS TUCVWXAYZPCIIC DA2 IB2LC2 L D2WE2 F2G2H2B2I2OJ2C2 A2K2O KJ2KL2M2I M2N2 A2 O2 P2K A2 IQ2R2C2 IS2T2 U2KHV2W2 X2IEIX2U Y2Z2T2V2DU F2A3 B3KC3D3E3 X2F3 G3IIIH3C2A3 I3B2F3 J A2Y2J3K3K3Y2LK3L3H2 DK3ELM3N3LK3 O3M2IK3KIK3K3K3IP3K3 K3 LLOOQ3R3S3T3K3EM2 U3K3K3 L V3W3I2 LK3I2K3X3EK3K3K3K3 IK3C2 I3KKKK3 K3Y3IK3K3EK3 SKKK3Z3A4IZ3K J B4B4 B4C4 LK3 K3K3 D4K3E4K3 L K3M3K3JIC2IK3III F4G4JP3 J K3H3E D K3K3E K3K3K3 J GA2KI3 M2JGK3GK3K3H4H3 K3I4A3DK3K3K3 PDK3S JIE2LGW3J4KK KK3A2 K3IS GK3IGK3 JK4KKK3 H3K3IIK3 K3KKG EG

The children on the lawnA
joined hand to handB
go round and roundC
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each arm going intoD
the next arm aroundC
full circleE
until it comesF
back into each of the singleE
bodies againG
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They are singing butH
not to each otherI
their feet moveJ
almost in time to the singingK
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We can seeL
the concentration onM
their faces their eyesN
fixed on the emptyL
moving spaces just inO
front of themP
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We might mistake thisQ
tranced moving for joyR
but there is no joy in itS
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We can see arm in armT
as we watch them goU
round and roundC
intent almostV
studious the grassW
underfoot ignored the treesX
circling the lawnA
ignored the lake ignoredY
that the whole pointZ
for themP
of going round and roundC
is fasterI
slowerI
going round and roundC
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ii-
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Being with youD
here in this roomA2
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is like groping through a mirrorI
whose glass has meltedB2
to the consistencyL
of gelatinC2
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You refuse to beL
and I-
an exact reflection yetD2
will not walk from the glassW
be separateE2
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Anyway it is rightF2
that they have putG2
so many mirrors hereH2
chipped hung crookedB2
in this room with its high transomI2
and empty wardrobe evenO
the back of the doorJ2
has oneC2
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There are people in the next roomA2
arguing opening and closing drawersK2
the walls are thinO
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You look past me listeningK
to them perhaps orJ2
watchingK
your own reflection somewhereL2
behind my headM2
over my shoulderI
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You shift and the bedM2
sags under us losing its focusN2
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there is someone in the next roomA2
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there is alwaysO2
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your faceP2
remote listeningK
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someone in the next roomA2
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iii-
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HoweverI
in all their gamesQ2
there seemsR2
to be some reasonC2
-
howeverI
abstract theyS2
at first appearT2
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When we read them legendsU2
in the eveningK
of monstrous battles and secretH
betrayals in the forestV2
and brutal deathsW2
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they scarcely listenedX2
one yawned and fidgeted anotherI
chewed the wooden handleE
of a hammerI
the youngest one examinedX2
a slight cut on his toeU
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and we wondered howY2
they could remainZ2
completely without fearT2
or even interestV2
as the final sword slid throughD
the dying heroU
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The next nightF2
walking along the beachA3
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we found the trenchesB3
they had been makingK
fortified with pointed sticksC3
driven into the sidesD3
of their sand moatsE3
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and a lake enclosed islandX2
with no bridgesF3
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a last attemptG3
howeverI
eroded by the waterI
in an hourI
to makeH3
maybe a refuge humanC2
and secure from the reachA3
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of whatever walks alongI3
sword heartedB2
these night beachesF3
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ivJ
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Returning to the roomA2
I notice howY2
all your wordJ3
plays calculated ploysK3
of the body the witticismsK3
of touch are nowY2
attempts to keep meL
at a certain distanceK3
and at length avoidL3
admitting I am hereH2
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I watch youD
watching my faceK3
indifferentlyE
yet with the same taut curiosityL
with which you might regardM3
a suddenly discovered partN3
of your own bodyL
a wart perhapsK3
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and I remember thatO3
you saidM2
in childhood you wereI
a tracer of mapsK3
not making but movingK
a pen or a forefingerI
over the courses of the riversK3
the different coloursK3
that mark the rise of mountainsK3
a memorizerI
of names to holdP3
these placesK3
in their proper placesK3
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So now you trace meL
like a country's boundaryL
or a strange new wrinkle inO
your own wellknown skinO
and I am fixed stuckQ3
down on the outspread mapR3
of this room of your mind's continentS3
here and yet not here likeT3
the wardrobe and the mirrorsK3
the voices through the wallE
your body ignored on the bedM2
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transfixedU3
by your eyes'K3
cold blue thumbtacksK3
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vL
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The children like the blockV3
of grey stone that was once a fortW3
but now is a museumI2
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especiallyL
they like the gunsK3
and the armour brought fromI2
other times and countriesK3
and when they go homeX3
their drawings will be fullE
for some days of swordsK3
archaic sunburst macesK3
broken spearsK3
and vivid red explosionsK3
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While they exploreI
the cannonsK3
they aren't our childrenC2
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we walk outside alongI3
the earthworks notingK
how they are crumblingK
under the unceasingK
attacks of feet and flower rootsK3
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The weaponsK3
that were once outsideY3
sharpening themselves on warI
are now indoorsK3
there in the fortressK3
fragileE
in glass casesK3
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Why is itS
I'm thinkingK
of the careful mouldingK
round the stonework archwaysK3
that in this time suchZ3
elaborate defences keepA4
things that are no longerI
muchZ3
worth defendingK
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viJ
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And you play the safe gameB4
the orphan gameB4
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the ragged winter gameB4
that says I am aloneC4
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hungry I know you want meL
to play it alsoK3
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the game of the waif who standsK3
at every picture windowK3
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shivering pinched nose pressedD4
against the glass the snowK3
collecting on his neckE4
watching the happy familiesK3
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a game of envyL
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Yet he despises them they are soK3
Victorian Christmas cardM3
the cheap paper showsK3
under the pigments ofJ
their cheerful fireI
places and satinC2
ribboned suburban laughterI
and they have their own formsK3
of parlourI
games father and motherI
playing father and motherI
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He's gladF4
to be leftG4
out by himselfJ
in the coldP3
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hugging himselfJ
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When I tell you thisK3
you say with a smile fakeH3
as a tinsel icicleE
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You do it tooD
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Which in some waysK3
is a lie but also I supposeK3
is right as usualE
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although I tend to poseK3
in other seasonsK3
outside other windowsK3
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viiJ
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Summer againG
in the mirrors of this roomA2
the children wheel singingK
the same songI3
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This casual bedM2
scruffy as dry turfJ
the counterpaneG
rumpled with small burrows isK3
their grassy lawnG
and these scuffed wallsK3
contain their circling treesK3
that low clogged sinkH4
their lakeH3
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a wasp comesK3
drawn by the piece of sandwichI4
left on the nearby beachA3
how carefully you doD
such detailsK3
one of the children flinchesK3
but won't let goK3
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You make themP
turn and turn according toD
the closed rules of your gamesK3
but there is no joy in itS
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and as we lieJ
arm in arm neitherI
joined nor separateE2
your observations change meL
to a spineless woman inG
a cage of bones obsolete fortW3
pulled inside outJ4
our lips movingK
almost in time to their singingK
-
listening to the openingK
and closing of the drawersK3
in the next roomA2
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of course there is alwaysK3
danger but whereI
would you locate itS
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the children spinG
a round cage of glassK3
from the warm airI
with their thread thinG
insect voicesK3
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and as we lieJ
here caughtK4
in the monotony of wanderingK
from room to room shiftingK
the place of our defencesK3
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I want to breakH3
these bones your prisoning rhythmsK3
winterI
summerI
all the glass casesK3
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erase all mapsK3
crack the protectingK
eggshell of your turningK
singing childrenG
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I want the circleE
brokenG

Margaret Atwood



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