Ship In The Parting's Storm Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AABBCCAADDEEFF GGHHII

Oh the sailors When shall we reach the shoreA
That I may die under this separation's coreA
Until the sun rises night comes and goes the dayB
I shall sit here for my whole life and watch thy wayB
Parting's storm came and high rose the tidesC
Parting's dark sieged the ship from all the sidesC
The wind had to decide will it reach the shoreA
The shore was away the tides rose the wind came moreA
The ship was nearly to sink aboutD
He looked up and gave a painful shoutD
I can't pass this part lord of mineE
I see every where the death's signE
Winds did stop and became lowF
Ship's moving came too slowF
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Towards the ship shore by itself did walkG
He looked at her without a talkG
Down to the ground pearls did fallH
Of the mere fell the separation 's wallH
They met after days that were unable to countI
They sat facing towards the horizon on the mountI

M.huzaifa Jalal Ud Din Rizwan
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Poet's note: This is the story of a man who met his love after a great parting. Metaphor used: ship and storm




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