Sun-up Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDCEFGAHD I J K DLDMLNM OKPQBOR S D I EBKTUBDVCWEXLYZ F A2B2C2D2E2PBF2G2IH2A 2I2FI2BJ2K2L2 E M2 D N2 A H2O2P2FQ2KDR2BS2T2GU ZBGU2V2E W2X2Y2Z2A3Z2B3L2C3C2 D3FDE3E3GR2F2GU2F3E3 BG3V2H3K I3 F J3

Shadows over a cradleA
fire light craningB
A handC
throws something in the fireD
and a smaller handC
runs into the flame and out againE
singed and emptyF
ShadowsG
settling over a cradleA
two handsH
and a fireD
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CELIAI
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Cherry cherry glowing on the hearth bright red cherry When you try to pick up cherry Celia's shriek sticks in you like a pinJ
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When God throws hailstones you cuddle in Celia's shawl and press your feet on her belly high up like a stool When Celia makes umbrella of her hand Rain falls through big pink spokes of her fingers When wind blows Celia's gown up off her legs she runs under pillars of the bank great round pillars of the bank have on white stockings tooK
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Celia says my fatherD
will bring me a golden bowlL
When I think of my fatherD
I cannot see himM
for the big yellow bowlL
like the moon with two handlesN
he carries in front of himM
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Grandpa grandpaO
Light all about youK
ginger pouring out of green jarsP
You don't believe he has gone away and left his great coatQ
so you pretend you see his face up in the ceilingB
When you clap your hands and cry grandpa grandpa grandpaO
Celia crosses herselfR
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It isn't a dream It comes again and again You hear ivy crying on steeples the flames haven't caught yet and images screaming when they see red light on the lilies on the stained glass window of St Joseph The girl with the black eyes holds you tight and you run and run past the wild wild towers and trees in the gardens tugging at their feet and little frightened dolls shut up in the shops crying and crying because no one stops you spin like a penny thrown out in the street Then the man clutches her by the hair He always clutches her by the hair His eyes stick out like spears You see her pulled back face and her black black eyes lit up by the glare Then everything goes out Please God don't let me dream any more of the girl with the black black eyesS
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Celia's shadow rocks and rocks and mama's eyes stare out of the pillow as though she had gone away and the night had come in her place as it comes in empty rooms you can't bear it the night threshing about and lashing its tail on its sides as bold as a wolf that isn't afraid and you scream at her face that is white as a stone on a grave and pull it around to the light till the night draws backward the night that walks alone and goes away without end Mama says I am cold Betty and shivers Celia tucks the quilt about her feet but I run for my little red cloak because red is hot like fireD
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I wish CeliaI
could see the sea climb up on the sky-
and slide off againE
Celia sayingB
I'd beg the world with youK
Celia holding on to the cabT
hands wrenched awayU
wind in the masts like Celia cryingB
Celia never minded if you slapped herD
when the comb made your hairs acheV
but though you rub your cheek against mama's handC
she has not said darling sinceW
Now I will slap her againE
I will bite her hand till it bleedsX
It is cool by the port holeL
The wet rags of the windY
flap in your faceZ
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THE ALLEYF
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Because you are four years oldA2
the candle is all dressed up in a new frillB2
And stars nod to you through the hole in the curtainC2
except the big stiff planetsD2
too fat to move about muchE2
and you curtsey back to the starsP
when no one is lookingB
You feel sorry for the poor wooden chairF2
that knows it isn't nice to sit onG2
and no one is sad but mamaI
You don't like mama to be sadH2
when you are four years oldA2
so you pretendI2
you like the bitter gold pale teaF
you pretendI2
if you don't drink it up pretty quickB
a little gold fishJ2
will think it is a pondK2
and come and get born in itL2
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It's hot in our street and the breeze is a dirty little broom that sweeps dust into our room and bits of paper out of the alley You are not let to play with the children in the alley But you must be very polite so you pass them and say good day and when they fling banana skins you fling them back againE
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There is no one to play with and the flies on the window buzz and buzz you can pull out their legs and stick pins in their bodies but still they buzz and mama says When Nero was a little boy he caught flies on his mama's window and pulled out their legs and stuck pins in their bodies and nobody loved him Buzz blue bellied flies buzz nasty black wheel of mama's machine you are the biggest fly of all you have the loudest buzz I hear you at dawn before the locusts But I like the picture of the Flood and the little babies getting drowned If I were there I would save them but as I can't save them I like to watch them getting drownedM2
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When mama buys of Ling Ho he smiles very wide and picks her the largest loquots The greens man gave her a cabbage and she held it against her black bodice and said what a beautiful green it was and put it on the table as though it had been a flower But next day we boiled and ate it with salt It was our dinnerD
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Christmas day I found Janie on my pillow Janie is made of rubber Her red and blue jacket won't come off Christmas dinner was green and white chicken and lettuce and peas and drops of oil on the salad smiley and full of light like the gold on the lady's teethN2
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But mama said politely Thank you we are dining out She wouldn't let you take one pea to put in the hole where the whistle was at the back of Janie's head so Janie should have some dinner So you went to the park with biscuits and black tea in a bottleA
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You feel very sadH2
when you climb on the fenceO2
to watch mama out of sightP2
The women in the alleyF
poke their heads out of doorwaysQ2
and watch her tooK
You know herD
by the way she holds her shouldersR2
till she is only a speckB
in a chain of specksS2
till she is swallowed upT2
But supposeG
that day after dayU
you were to watch for her faceZ
and it didn't come backB
SupposeG
it were to drop out of the string of white facesU2
like the pearl out of my chainV2
I never found againE
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Mabel minds you while mama is outW2
she washes while she singsX2
Three blind miceY2
they all run away from the farmer's wifeZ2
who cut off their tailsA3
with a carving knifeZ2
Wind blows out Mabel's sheetsB3
way you blow in a bag before you burst itL2
Wind has a soapy smellC3
It's heavier'n sunC2
that lies all over you without any weightD3
and makes you feel happyF
and crinkly like bubbling waterD
There's no sun on the empty houseE3
sly looking houseE3
you can't see in its windowsG
that watch you out of their cornersR2
Perhaps there's a big spider thereF2
spinning gray threads over the windowsG
till they look like dead people's facesU2
Jimmie saysF3
Jimmie's hair is white as a white mouseE3
His lashes are gold as mama's wedding ringB
and his mouth feels cool and smoothG3
like a flower wet with rainV2
You wouldn't believe Jimmie was differentH3
till he showed youK
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Blind wet sheets flapping on the lines sun in your eyes dark gold sun full of little black spots you have to blink and blink round eyes of Jimmie Jimmie's blue jumper blue shadow of wall all the world holding still as when a clock stops streets still people still no streets no people only sky and wall sun glaring bright as God down at you and Jimmie shadow like a purple cloth trailing off the wallI3
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Wild wet sheets flapping in the wind big slippered feet flapping too big balloon face rushing up the alley houses closing up again windows looking round Mabel pulls you in the gate and shakes you and tells you not to tell your mama And you wonder if God has spoiled JimmieF
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MAMJ3

Lola Ridge



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