Prickles And Blisters Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDB EFEGHEIJKLMNONPQCRSC KT| My will is greater than | A |
| The prickles and blisters on the soles of my feet | B |
| These prickles and blisters | C |
| Endured from the path draped with roses | D |
| The thorns of which slyly protrudes to feed on the soles of my feet | B |
| - | |
| Tip toeing | E |
| Even so it s shrilling barbs pierced through my bare flesh | F |
| Plantars on the soles of my feet bursting | E |
| Beneath an alluring bed of a finely trimmed runic bushes | G |
| The path diverts towards the smooth flooring of blazing lava I have yet to cross | H |
| Maybe this time instead of tip toeing | E |
| I should take strides by the corners of my heels | I |
| Though my heart is racing almost crippled with fear | J |
| My pain towards the end is silenced with the anaesthesis of determination | K |
| From a distance the on looker you are | L |
| You think of me stupid | M |
| Maybe na ve | N |
| Weak even | O |
| Yet the pride within me | N |
| The love of my soul | P |
| The respect of my heart | Q |
| Pushes my limbs to move across the spikes and fires | C |
| And when I sit | R |
| To take a breath | S |
| I unpluck the thorns and peel the blisters | C |
| One by one | K |
| And a sense of pride blushes over my cheeks | T |
Laurindam M
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 12/23/2020
Poet's note: This is a reflection of this crippling journey of my life; the challenges I face daily, though with determination, hope and faith to get out of it-sane.
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