My Elysium Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE CFGH IJABCKI LMNC OPQRST| I am desperate for a peaceful resting | A |
| From the exhaustion of nursing this electric surge tugging through my soul | B |
| Every strike invokes a hounding feeling of scornfulness | C |
| It is just too strong to calm | D |
| Burdensome | E |
| - | |
| I am one born of disappointments and moulded in frustrations | C |
| Infused in rage | F |
| I have no energy to pull the plug | G |
| I have no one to pull the plug to make it stop | H |
| - | |
| You watch as if you care | I |
| For you it means nothing to you it matters not | J |
| You are ignorant because you have taken and reaped everything | A |
| You are the cause of it all the monster who crippled my soul | B |
| Even too painful to bear are the agonies from the gushing incisions by your hands | C |
| It is a struggle for me to heal to numb the pain | K |
| When it suits you you pretend and oppose as if you care | I |
| - | |
| I want to escape from it all | L |
| My power to fight is drained you should smile | M |
| My armour is broken and my soul penetrated and exposed you should be proud | N |
| My defences crushed you should dance | C |
| - | |
| I am no longer willing to hope | O |
| I want to go | P |
| I need to rest and quiet down my mind | Q |
| To experience serenity | R |
| I need a place where I can lick my wounds one last time | S |
| Before I fall quietly into an eternal healing slumber | T |
Laurindam M
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Poet's note: Wrote the poem in 2015. I was dealing with depression, nursing suicidal thoughts.
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