My Elysium Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCDE CFGH IJABCKI LMNC OPQRST

I am desperate for a peaceful restingA
From the exhaustion of nursing this electric surge tugging through my soulB
Every strike invokes a hounding feeling of scornfulnessC
It is just too strong to calmD
BurdensomeE
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I am one born of disappointments and moulded in frustrationsC
Infused in rageF
I have no energy to pull the plugG
I have no one to pull the plug to make it stopH
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You watch as if you careI
For you it means nothing to you it matters notJ
You are ignorant because you have taken and reaped everythingA
You are the cause of it all the monster who crippled my soulB
Even too painful to bear are the agonies from the gushing incisions by your handsC
It is a struggle for me to heal to numb the painK
When it suits you you pretend and oppose as if you careI
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I want to escape from it allL
My power to fight is drained you should smileM
My armour is broken and my soul penetrated and exposed you should be proudN
My defences crushed you should danceC
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I am no longer willing to hopeO
I want to goP
I need to rest and quiet down my mindQ
To experience serenityR
I need a place where I can lick my wounds one last timeS
Before I fall quietly into an eternal healing slumberT

Laurindam M
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 08/14/2020

Poet's note: Wrote the poem in 2015. I was dealing with depression, nursing suicidal thoughts.




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