Vision Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFGF HIHI

As the salty drops fallA
It fills the river beneathB
Bit by bit it gathersC
Deeply with its faint beatD
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Overflow for it cannotE
For drowned shall it beF
The ocean is slowly formingG
The colour is different can you seeF
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Before was drops now a riverH
Are you understanding my notionI
My head is under waterH
But I'm breathing fine beneath this oceanI

Lauren Bianca Maduray
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 11/06/2020

Poet's note: This poem is specifically targets at those people who hide or suppress their feelings




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