The Razor's Edge. Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCB DDCE FFGG

A cipher stirs in the hollow of my skullA
A morras of desire only you can stirB
I'm drawn to your dark fire like a moth consumed by a flameC
A passion that devours and leaves me a hollow gnawing desireB
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Your eyes like two black holes suck all the light from meD
Leaving me a vacant echoing space where only shadows beD
Your touch sets the tinder of my soul aflameC
Melting my heart and unleashing a maelstrom of painE
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In your presence I'm a fracturing mirror shattered by the forceF
Of my own longing reflected back a grotesque and beautiful courseF
You're the razor that slices through my defences and lays me bareG
Exposing the raw pulsing wound that only you my love can repairG

Kisakye Jethro Mark
(C) All Rights Reserved. Poem Submitted on 06/27/2025

Poet's note: It's easy to write about love when you feel what you express.




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