Older, Younger, Both Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: ABCD EFD GGHI JKLM NOHH PQM

I feel older younger bothA
at once Every time I winB
I lose Every time I countC
I forget and must begin againD
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I must begin again and again IE
must begin Every time I loseF
I win and must begin againD
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Everything I plan must wait andG
having to wait has made me old andG
the older I get the more I wait and everythingH
I'm waiting for has already been plannedI
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I feel sadder wiser neitherJ
together Everything is almostK
true and almost true is everywhereL
I feel sadder wiser neither at onceM
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I end in beginning in ending I findN
that beginning is the first thing to doO
I stop when I start but my heart keeps on beatingH
so I must go on starting in spite of the stoppingH
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I must stop my stopping and start to startP
I can end at the beginning or begin at the endQ
I feel older younger both at onceM

Joyce Sutphen



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