The Visit Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AAA BBB CDC EEE FFF GGG HHH IIJ KKK LMM NNN OPP QQR SSS TTT UUU TTT TTT VVW XXX TTT YYX ZOP A2B2A2 TTT GGG CCD BBC2 PPP B2YA2N

I reached the cottage I knew it from the cardA
He had given me the low door heavily barredA
Steep roof and two yews whispering on guardA
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Dusk thickened as I came but I could smellB
First red wallflower and an early hyacinth bellB
And see dim primroses O I can tellB
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I thought they love the flowers he loved The rainC
Shook from fruit bushes in new showers againD
As I brushed past and gemmed the window paneC
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Bare was the window yet and the lamp brightE
I saw them sitting there streamed with the lightE
That overflowed upon the enclosing nightE
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Poor things I wonder why they've lit up soF
A voice said passing on the road belowF
Who are they asked another Don't you knowF
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Their voices crept away I heard no moreG
As I crossed the garden and knocked at the doorG
I waited then knocked louder than beforeG
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And thrice and still in vain So on the grassH
I stepped and tap tapped on the rainy glassH
Then did a girl without turning towards me passH
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From the room I heard the heavy barred door creakI
And a voice entreating from the doorway speakI
Will you come this way a voice childlike and quickJ
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The way was dark I followed her white frockK
Past the now chiming sweet tongued unseen clockK
Into the room One figure like a rockK
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Draped in an unstarred night his mother bowedL
Unrising and unspeaking His aunt stoodM
And took my hand murmuring So good so goodM
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Never such quiet people had I knownN
Voices they scarcely needed they had grownN
To talk less by the word than muted toneN
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We'll soon have tea the girl said Please sit hereO
She pushed a heavy low deep seated chairP
I knew at once was his and I sat thereP
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I could not look at them It seemed I madeQ
Noise in that quietness I was afraidQ
To look or speak until the aunt's voice saidR
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You were his friend And that You were awokeS
My sense and nervousness found voice and spokeS
Of what he had been until a bullet brokeS
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A too brief friendship The rock like mother keptT
Night still around her The aunt silently weptT
And the girl into the screen's low shadow steptT
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You were great friends said with calm voice the motherU
I answered Never friend had such anotherU
Then the girl's lips Nor sister such a brotherU
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Her words were like a sounding pebble castT
Into a hollow silence but at lastT
She moved and bending to my low chair passedT
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Swift leaf like fingers o'er my face and saidT
You are not like him And as she turned her headT
Into full light beneath the lamp's green shadeT
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I saw the sunken spaces of her eyesV
Then her face listening to my dumb surpriseV
Forgive she said a blind girl's libertiesW
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You were his friend I wanted so to seeX
The friends my brother had Now let's have teaX
She poured and passed a cup and cakes to meX
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These are my cakes she smiled and as I ateT
She talked and to the others cup and plateT
Passed as they in their shadow and silence satT
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Thanks we are used to each other she said when IY
Rose in the awkwardness of seeing shyY
Of helping and of watching helplesslyX
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And from the manner of their hands 'twas clearZ
They too were blind but I knew they could hearO
My pitiful thoughts as I sat aching thereP
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I needs must talk until the girl was goneA2
A while out of the room The lamp shone onB2
But the true light out of the room was goneA2
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Rose loved him so her mother said and sighedT
He was our eyes he was our joy and prideT
And all that's left is but to say he diedT
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She ceased as Rose returned Then as beforeG
We talked and paused until Tell me once moreG
What was it he said And I told her once moreG
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She listened in her face was pride and painC
As in her mind's eye near he stood and plainC
Then the thin leaves fell on my cheek againD
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And on my hands He must have loved you wellB
She whispered as her hands from my hands fellB
Silence flowed back with thoughts unspeakableC2
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It was a painful thing to leave them thereP
Within the useless light and stirless airP
Let me show you the way Mind there's a stairP
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Here then another stair ten paces onB2
Isn't there a moon Good byeY
And she was goneA2
Full moon upon the drenched fruit garden shoneN

John Freeman



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