The Visit Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis

Rhyme Scheme: AAA BBB CDC EEE FFF GGG HHH IIJ KKK LMM NNN OPP QQR SSS TTT UUU TTT TTT VVW XXX TTT YYX ZOP A2B2A2 TTT GGG CCD BBC2 PPP B2YA2N

I reached the cottage I knew it from the cardA
He had given me the low door heavily barredA
Steep roof and two yews whispering on guardA
-
Dusk thickened as I came but I could smellB
First red wallflower and an early hyacinth bellB
And see dim primroses O I can tellB
-
I thought they love the flowers he loved The rainC
Shook from fruit bushes in new showers againD
As I brushed past and gemmed the window paneC
-
Bare was the window yet and the lamp brightE
I saw them sitting there streamed with the lightE
That overflowed upon the enclosing nightE
-
Poor things I wonder why they've lit up soF
A voice said passing on the road belowF
Who are they asked another Don't you knowF
-
Their voices crept away I heard no moreG
As I crossed the garden and knocked at the doorG
I waited then knocked louder than beforeG
-
And thrice and still in vain So on the grassH
I stepped and tap tapped on the rainy glassH
Then did a girl without turning towards me passH
-
From the room I heard the heavy barred door creakI
And a voice entreating from the doorway speakI
Will you come this way a voice childlike and quickJ
-
The way was dark I followed her white frockK
Past the now chiming sweet tongued unseen clockK
Into the room One figure like a rockK
-
Draped in an unstarred night his mother bowedL
Unrising and unspeaking His aunt stoodM
And took my hand murmuring So good so goodM
-
Never such quiet people had I knownN
Voices they scarcely needed they had grownN
To talk less by the word than muted toneN
-
We'll soon have tea the girl said Please sit hereO
She pushed a heavy low deep seated chairP
I knew at once was his and I sat thereP
-
I could not look at them It seemed I madeQ
Noise in that quietness I was afraidQ
To look or speak until the aunt's voice saidR
-
You were his friend And that You were awokeS
My sense and nervousness found voice and spokeS
Of what he had been until a bullet brokeS
-
A too brief friendship The rock like mother keptT
Night still around her The aunt silently weptT
And the girl into the screen's low shadow steptT
-
You were great friends said with calm voice the motherU
I answered Never friend had such anotherU
Then the girl's lips Nor sister such a brotherU
-
Her words were like a sounding pebble castT
Into a hollow silence but at lastT
She moved and bending to my low chair passedT
-
Swift leaf like fingers o'er my face and saidT
You are not like him And as she turned her headT
Into full light beneath the lamp's green shadeT
-
I saw the sunken spaces of her eyesV
Then her face listening to my dumb surpriseV
Forgive she said a blind girl's libertiesW
-
You were his friend I wanted so to seeX
The friends my brother had Now let's have teaX
She poured and passed a cup and cakes to meX
-
These are my cakes she smiled and as I ateT
She talked and to the others cup and plateT
Passed as they in their shadow and silence satT
-
Thanks we are used to each other she said when IY
Rose in the awkwardness of seeing shyY
Of helping and of watching helplesslyX
-
And from the manner of their hands 'twas clearZ
They too were blind but I knew they could hearO
My pitiful thoughts as I sat aching thereP
-
I needs must talk until the girl was goneA2
A while out of the room The lamp shone onB2
But the true light out of the room was goneA2
-
Rose loved him so her mother said and sighedT
He was our eyes he was our joy and prideT
And all that's left is but to say he diedT
-
She ceased as Rose returned Then as beforeG
We talked and paused until Tell me once moreG
What was it he said And I told her once moreG
-
She listened in her face was pride and painC
As in her mind's eye near he stood and plainC
Then the thin leaves fell on my cheek againD
-
And on my hands He must have loved you wellB
She whispered as her hands from my hands fellB
Silence flowed back with thoughts unspeakableC2
-
It was a painful thing to leave them thereP
Within the useless light and stirless airP
Let me show you the way Mind there's a stairP
-
Here then another stair ten paces onB2
Isn't there a moon Good byeY
And she was goneA2
Full moon upon the drenched fruit garden shoneN

John Frederick Freeman



Rate:
(1)



Poem topics: , Print This Poem , Rhyme Scheme

Submit Spanish Translation
Submit German Translation
Submit French Translation

About The Visit

The Visit is a poem by John Frederick Freeman. This page includes the poem text, poet information, related topics, comments, and similar poems.



Write your comment about The Visit poem by John Frederick Freeman


 
Best Poems of John Frederick Freeman

Recent Interactions*

This poem was read 30 times,

This poem was added to the favorite list by 0 members,

This poem was voted by 0 members.

(* Interactions only in the last 7 days)

New Poems

Popular Poets