Elegy Viii: The Comparison Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABCDDDDEECCFFGG DHIIDDCCFFDDFFJJKKLM NNOOPQRRSSTUDDDDDDAs the sweet sweat of roses in a still | A |
As that which from chafed musk cats' pores doth trill | A |
As the almighty balm of th' early East | B |
Such are the sweat drops of my mistress' breast | C |
And on her brow her skin such lustre sets | D |
They seem no sweat drops but pearl coronets | D |
Rank sweaty froth thy Mistress's brow defiles | D |
Like spermatic issue of ripe menstruous boils | D |
Or like the scum which by need's lawless law | E |
Enforced Sanserra's starved men did draw | E |
From parboiled shoes and boots and all the rest | C |
Which were with any sovereigne fatness blest | C |
And like vile lying stones in saffroned tin | F |
Or warts or weals they hang upon her skin | F |
Round as the world's her head on every side | G |
Like to the fatal ball which fell on Ide | G |
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Or that whereof God had such jealousy | D |
As for the ravishing thereof we die | H |
Thy head is like a rough hewn statue of jet | I |
Where marks for eyes nose mouth are yet scarce set | I |
Like the first Chaos or flat seeming face | D |
Of Cynthia when th' earth's shadows her embrace | D |
Like Proserpine's white beauty keeping chest | C |
Or Jove's best fortunes urn is her fair breast | C |
Thine's like worm eaten trunks clothed in seals' skin | F |
Or grave that's dust without and stink within | F |
And like that slender stalk at whose end stands | D |
The woodbine quivering are her arms and hands | D |
Like rough barked elm boughs or the russet skin | F |
Of men late scourged for madness or for sin | F |
Like sun parched quarters on the city gate | J |
Such is thy tanned skin's lamentable state | J |
And like a bunch of ragged carrots stand | K |
The short swol'n fingers of thy gouty hand | K |
Then like the Chimic's masculine equal fire | L |
Which in the Lymbecks warm womb doth inspire | M |
Into th' earth's worthless dirt a soul of gold | N |
Such cherishing heat her best loved part doth hold | N |
Thine's like the dread mouth of a fired gun | O |
Or like hot liquid metals newly run | O |
Into clay moulds or like to that Etna | P |
Where round about the grass is burnt away | Q |
Are not your kisses then as filthy and more | R |
As a worm sucking an envenomed sore | R |
Doth not thy feareful hand in feeling quake | S |
As one which gath'ring flowers still fears a snake | S |
Is not your last act harsh and violent | T |
As when a plough a stony ground doth rent | U |
So kiss good turtles so devoutly nice | D |
Are priests in handling reverent sacrifice | D |
And such in searching wounds the surgeon is | D |
As we when we embrace or touch or kiss | D |
Leave her and I will leave comparing thus | D |
She and comparisons are odious | D |
John Donne
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