The Hard Strait Of The Feinne Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: AABBCCDDEEF FGGHHIIJJKKKKLMCCEEN NKKBBEEKKFFKKKKOOPPQ QRRBBIF KKSSQQKKTTUUMMVVKKKK WWIIXXBBSSKKEE JJBBKKKKRRKKKK KKKKYYXKKK KKRRKKAAZZKKIIA2A2KK KKKK RRKKAAKKUUKKB2B2Now of the hard strait of the Feinne this legend's verse shall tell | A |
When Fionn's men had fought and won and all with them was well | A |
And victory on Erin's shores had given spoil which they | B |
Alone could win whose swords of old were mightiest in the fray | B |
For in those days the bravest hand and not the craftiest brain | C |
Got gold and skill in gallant fight was found the surest gain | C |
Great Fionn's wont it was to give when foes had bled and broke | D |
A feast to nobles and to chiefs and all the humble folk | D |
Upon the plain they sat and ate the meat which smoking came | E |
From layers of stone well laid on pits half filled with charcoal flame | E |
Where 'neath the covering roof of turf that kept the heat aglow | F |
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The boar was quickly roasted whole with many a stag and roe | F |
And while the feast with laugh and jest gave careless time to most | G |
Two watchers bold kept guard the while and gazed o'er sea and coast | G |
Two watchers good and keenly eyed sent out by Fionn to mark | H |
If danger rode upon the sea with Norway's pirate bark | H |
Full well they watched although behind they heard the shouted song | I |
And knew the wine was bathing red the fair beards of the strong | I |
While chanted verse and music's notes arose upon the air | J |
And the briny breeze itself half seemed a savoury steam to bear | J |
Nor left their post when from the clouds the hailstones leaped to ground | K |
And plaids were wrapt o'er shoulders broad and o'er deep chests were wound | K |
But Fionn's plaid untouched lay yet upon the earth outspread | K |
And white it grew as lichened rock or Prophet's hoary head | K |
Oh would it were all ruddy gold there lying thickly strewn | L |
What joy were ours to share alike and bear away each stone | M |
And laughingly each filled his hands forgetful of the twain | C |
Their comrades good on guard who stood to watch the moor and main | C |
But when their lonely vigil o'er they Roin and Aild came | E |
And found how little friendship counts when played the spoiler's game | E |
Sore angered that no hand for them had set apart a prize | N |
They murmured With such men of greed all faith and kindness dies | N |
When thus they deal with us in peace how shall we fare when blood | K |
Runs from the wounds to blind the eyes to aught but selfish good | K |
They swore that they forgotten thus were better far away | B |
And sailed to Lochlin's distant shore and served in her array | B |
Their fame was great in Norway's realm and love for Aild came | E |
To melt the heart of Norway's queen a sudden quenchless flame | E |
She fled with Aild from the King and soon on Scotland's coast | K |
She trod a messenger of ill a danger to the host | K |
Great Eragon far Lochlin's King was not the man to know | F |
The blood mount hot at insult's stroke without an answering blow | F |
His dragon keels were rolled to waves that shouted welcome loud | K |
To glittering helm and painted shield beneath each spar and shroud | K |
Oh strong was Eragon in war in battle victor oft | K |
From many a rank from many a mast his banner streamed aloft | K |
With forty ships he set to sea and scores of glancing oars | O |
Streaked white his wake on fiord and loch along the echoing shores | O |
The Shetland Islands saw them pass where on the tides their sails | P |
Shone like a flight of mighty swans fast borne on wintry gales | P |
Hoarse as the raven's note their oath rang over all the seas | Q |
False Fionn's host should bend and break before the Northern breeze | Q |
And southward onward still they steered and up Loch Leven bore | R |
As you may know for one great ship was lost upon the shore | R |
The sunken rock on which she drove and inlet where she lay | B |
Were called the Galley's Crag and Port and bear the name to day | B |
They left her taking all her crew and landing near Glencoe | I |
On level ground their tents were set thick planted row on row | F |
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To Fionn of the Feinne that day King Eragon sent word | K |
To yield him homage or abide the hard doom of the sword | K |
But grievous then was Fionn's strait for thrice a thousand men | S |
His best and bravest far away were hunting hill and glen | S |
The wives the old and feeble folk alone were left and these | Q |
He gathered asking how to blind the strangers of the seas | Q |
Then gave they counsel We are weak By thee must peace be sought | K |
E'en though with massy store of gold the boon to day be bought | K |
And if all this do not avail they said O Fionn thou | T |
Shouldst yield thy daughter as the price our ransom on her brow | T |
Their messenger then offered these before the set of sun | U |
When flamed the wrath from Norway's King I ask not what I've won | U |
Your master stands before you now my vengeance is my own | M |
For Aild 's deed the Feinne as slaves in Norway shall atone | M |
Back went the messenger in haste and sadly Fionn knew | V |
The threat was uttered by the strong against the old and few | V |
But homeward from the forest soon he saw each hero's hound | K |
Come swiftly back in front of all he saw his Oscar bound | K |
And when the foremost hunters came he told their noble band | K |
How fight was sought with them this day upon the Northern strand | K |
Then looked they for some ground whose strength would quickly hide and save | W |
Their little force till gathering might gave fortune to the brave | W |
They dug four trenches deep where firs above the birches flung | I |
Red gnarled limbs that glowed at eve the dark green plumes among | I |
There hidden silently they watched while rugged scarred and high | X |
Just at their rear a peak appeared to move against the sty | X |
Steep were its rocky ledges strewn with jagged stones that lay | B |
So loose one hand might send a mass on its resistless way | B |
While from the neighbouring hills the mount was sundered by a glen | S |
Where lightly crossed the grey cloud mists but never mortal men | S |
Such was the chosen fort The Feinne into the trenches went | K |
For succour through all Alban's realm their messengers were sent | K |
To the green slopes of deep Glencoe the warriors summoned came | E |
Alas too few to brave in fight the men of Norway's name | E |
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They held long counsel and the chief sent forth that hostage fair | J |
His daughter with a chosen band his words of peace to bear | J |
And Fergus his young son to speak on his behalf that they | B |
Might change to love the king's black thought and all his wrath allay | B |
For Fergus' speech like ivy wreath o'er heart of rock could wind | K |
Till tender thoughts like nestling birds would come and shelter find | K |
Wealth to awake the Northmen's greed should weight his tempting word | K |
For quaichs of gold and precious belts and magic stones which stirred | K |
The torpid blood of all disease to vigorous life once more | R |
And fivescore mares of iron grey and hunting hawks threescore | R |
Were gifts to promise with good herds and cows with calves at side | K |
They placed the maid upon a horse and bade her boldly ride | K |
With Fergus marching at her rein his comrades close at hand | K |
They came to where the fleet and camp thick covered sea and land | K |
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And halting there young Fergus spake across a space of ground | K |
Unto the king who foremost stood with mailed men around | K |
He offered all the tribute rich and that fair lady proud | K |
But when he ceased a silence fell and then the answer loud | K |
In Eragon's deep voice rang forth Let Fionn bring me all | Y |
All that he hath on earth and here let him before me fall | Y |
Him and his wife before me here upon the shore that I | X |
May see them on their knees to me swear troth and fealty | K |
While as they homage make I shall above them rear my blade | K |
To spare or slay them at my feet if so their debt be paid | K |
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Then called in scorn the lady's voice No Eragon your might | K |
Hath not across the broad salt seas brought such a host to fight | K |
As e'er shall cause my father's knees to bend to you in prayer | R |
Nor shall you ever call me bride or spoil of Erin wear | R |
She quickly turned her horse and went but Fergus stood and waved | K |
The signal banner for the chief and for awhile he braved | K |
The onset of the foe and fought until the evening fell | A |
Then gave the council their advice to Fionn It were well | A |
That Aild should himself defy the king and man to man | Z |
With sevenscore 'gainst sevenscore contend before the van | Z |
And thus they fought and Aild fell and Eragon defied | K |
An equal band to equal fight for great had grown his pride | K |
Then paused and pondered Fionn long and doubted whom to ask | I |
To lead in such a venture great and dare so grave a task | I |
But Goll the son of Morna named at Fionn's call went forth | A2 |
And matched with equal force back drove the boasters of the North | A2 |
And yet again a band as strong was overcome and made | K |
To own our heroes' swords were best when man to man arrayed | K |
But Eragon in fury cried his men should conquer yet | K |
For eight days more aye sevenscore 'gainst sevenscore were set | K |
And when the blood had flowed in streams to utter madness urged | K |
Against the trenches of the Feinne their baffled army surged | K |
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Then sparkled swords like gleams of light upon the ocean's spray | R |
When tossed aloft to wind and sun where battling currents play | R |
In that fierce fray did Eragon the son of Morna greet | K |
And striking fast their mighty blades ascend and flashing meet | K |
Then sank the stranger king in death and Goll sore wounded fell | A |
Against the Northmen went the day and of their slain they tell | A |
That from Glen Fewich to the shore they lay and of the host | K |
So few escaped that galleys twain alone left Scotland's coast | K |
Nay even they ne'er reached a port so that in Norway none | U |
Could tell how Eragon revenged the deed by Aild done | U |
But sorrow came upon the Feinne for all their strongest dead | K |
And Fionn found that from that time his fortune waned and fled | K |
For ne'er again in equal strength the Feinne in arms were seen | B2 |
Since the dark days of Aild 's love and Norway's evil queen | B2 |
John Campbell
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