Under One Blanket Poem Rhyme Scheme and Analysis
Rhyme Scheme: ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IJIJ HKHK LCLC MNMN OPOP QHQH RSRS TMTM MUMU HMHM MVMV WXWX MMMM XMXMThe sun went down in flame and smoke | A |
The cold night passed without alarms | B |
And when the bitter morning broke | A |
Our men stood to their arms | B |
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But not a foe in front was found | C |
After the long and stubborn fight | D |
The enemy had left the ground | C |
Where we had lain that night | D |
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In hollows where the sun was lost | E |
Unthawed still lay the shining snow | F |
And on the rugged ground the frost | E |
In slender spears did grow | F |
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Close to us where our final rush | G |
Was made at closing in of day | H |
We saw amid an awful hush | G |
The rigid shapes of clay | H |
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Things which but yesterday had life | I |
And answered to the trumpet's call | J |
Remained as victims of the strife | I |
Clods of the Valley all | J |
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Then the grim detail marched away | H |
A grave from the hard soil to wrench | K |
Wherein should sleep the Blue and Grey | H |
All in a ghastly trench | K |
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A thicket of young pines arose | L |
Midway upon that frosty ground | C |
A shelter from the winds and snows | L |
And by its edge I found | C |
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Two stiffened forms where they had died | M |
As sculptured marble white and cold | N |
Lying together side by side | M |
Beneath one blanket's fold | N |
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My heart already touched and sad | O |
The blanket down I gently drew | P |
And saw a sturdy form well clad | O |
From head to heel in Blue | P |
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Beside him gaunt from many a fast | Q |
A pale and boyish rebel lay | H |
Free of all pangs of life at last | Q |
In tattered suit of Grey | H |
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There side by side those soldiers slept | R |
Each for the cause that he thought good | S |
And bowing down my head I wept | R |
Through human brotherhood | S |
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Oh sirs it was a piteous thing | T |
To see how they had vainly tried | M |
With strips of shirts and bits of string | T |
To stay life's ebbing tide | M |
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The story told itself aright | M |
Print scarce were plainer to the eye | U |
How they together in the night | M |
Had laid them down to die | U |
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The story told itself I say | H |
How smitten by their wounds and cold | M |
They'd nestled close the Blue and Grey | H |
Beneath one blanket's fold | M |
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All their poor surgery could do | M |
They did to stop their wounds so deep | V |
Until at last the Grey and Blue | M |
Like comrades fell asleep | V |
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We dug for them a generous grave | W |
Under that sombre thicket's lee | X |
And there we laid the sleeping brave | W |
To wait God's reveille | X |
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That grave by many a tear was graced | M |
From ragged heroes ranged around | M |
As in one blanket they were placed | M |
In consecrated ground | M |
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Aye consecrated without flaw | X |
Because upon that bloody sod | M |
My soul uplifted stood and saw | X |
Where CHRIST had lately trod | M |
James Barron Hope
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